The structure is still tight, and it can be seen that the world line is very large. After the modification, it is more delicate and the plot is more complete. There are typos and some details, but it does not affect it.
Although my wife is stupid, the author's description is not stupid at all, the writing is very delicate, and the logic is correct. A bit of sensuality lingers on the review line.
The bull b, the black dog charges directly, the personal style is distinct, and in my opinion there are no mistakes, there are not many typos, the character's personality is very... Distinct and excellent. Strong recommendation, I have nothing to say. Very touching.