The beginning is a bit messy, like a ball of yarn that can't be smoothed out, but after the beginning, the story unfolds very smoothly and naturally, and the emotional line with Xiaozhong is also deeply portrayed.
It's a very sweet book. It's pretty good (praise) without too much OOC. At the same time, the writing rhythm is also pretty good. It ranks among the top among all the romance novels I've read.
It's pretty good. The writing may be a bit discouraging at the beginning, but it gets smoother and smoother later on. The ending felt a little down, but overall it was pretty good.
I can see that my wife struggled with the emotional line, but because it perfectly matched my brainwaves, the five stars (thumb), except for the emotional line, overall gave me a sense of familiarity with a shounen manga, which is very good. By the way, it's FGO Master (female) Fujimaru Ritsuka and Konaka's Laro.