When reading the article, I was criticized for various reasons and did not continue reading. It is highly subjective and has a certain degree of aggression. There is a small chance that I will pick it up and re-evaluate it.
The perfunctory smell between the lines is too overwhelming. It seems that the writing is either not good at writing or not writing seriously. It is written like an outline and a running account. It is a waste of time and has a bad impression.
The description of the characters' emotions is pretentious and procrastinating. It's outrageous that a story whose plot content only exists in the copywriting can be so successful that no one has ever done it before or since.
Apart from anything else, the author is quite capable of mentioning the plot of a female character and the protagonist engaging in a competitive marriage even after reading a few chapters.
A quick glance at the two Infinite Streaming books of Butterfly Spirit shows that the default sense of "setting up what skills are needed for a difficult game, and then allocating the required skills to the characters" in the dungeon is too serious. It seems that team cooperation will arrange whatever is missing in the actual game. It lacks story and the emotional line is unremarkable. It is a bit like the kind of hydrology that can write thousands of chapters.
The shaping of Shou can make people feel the charm, but the shaping of Gong only left me with the impression of incompetence and rage. It did not reflect charm, ability, or reasonable progress in the emotional line. It was very inconsistent in terms of look and feel.
The author, please take a look for yourself. Will readers find it sweet when they insert a plot about going crazy and triggering CP in the article? They are so spoiled by the original that they don't even know what kind of propriety should be observed when a fujoshi eats real CP around him. Is this kind of plot deliberately written to offend people? The rest of it is pretty good.
This is the first time I have read a story that clearly appeals to the characters but feels like a waste of money and time. The miserable Shou who originally went for the slow-burning emotional line but ended up eating a mouthful of it when he didn't want to, the incompetent and morally kidnapped Gao, the green tea with a strong sense of presence, the various supporting characters who are very annoying in order to highlight the isolation and helplessness, the useless and existential rebirth setting, the mediocre plot line, pure torture.
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