-Chapter 100 was pretty good before. Although it had some minor bugs, it was better because of its clever setting. After more than 100 chapters, the plot felt disconnected from the previous one. When I felt that everyone was about to gather, and everyone was training to improve their strength and work together to do something big, I finished all the subsequent plots in a short time... [Covering my face and laughing and crying] (because the self-established sect is around 70 chapters, and based on the leisurely pace of the previous chapter, I thought it was a long story. After a hundred chapters, I became more and more confused)
-The emotional line is not good, Gong had a crush on him the whole time, and Shou was ignorant and unresponsive the whole time and treated him like a brother. It was almost the end. Gong confessed hastily, and Shou just turned back and it was over [covering face and laughing]
-There are more than 20 students. There are too many group portraits and they are not fully written [covering face, laughing and crying]. It is more like there is no time to write all the background boards later.
-Overall, I felt a bit pity after reading it. If it were not cut in half, it would be a good work.
-The humor is good but the writing is awkward. I can't watch the plot except for the two of them getting along [eating melon] I understand, I like to watch them talking to me in cross talk [covering face and laughing]
-But after the most anticipated copywriting was discontinued, some strange and weird memories were updated [covering my face and laughing and crying] If you want to watch the real match, you don't have to watch it [covering your face and laughing and crying] The interaction between the protagonists also became unsightly. I don't know what kept me going through it. Maybe I'm curious about how to make it more round [covering face and laughing]
-It's weird to divide it into paragraphs. One sentence is divided into paragraphs.
To be honest, I don't feel the charm of Shou. It's true that Shou can't do anything. The live broadcast is just about making people make wishes. The emotional change between Gong and Shou is not written. It seems that he suddenly fell in love with Shou. If Gong has a deep love for Shou based on luck alone, it will inevitably feel utilitarian (because Gong's setting is extremely poor career luck). The process of Shou getting to know a new character is almost the same. Gong/Gong's younger brother takes Shou to eat with friends/family, and then Gong's younger brother will call Shou King. Then the supporting characters curiously asked why they were called the king, and then they said, oh, how can such a refreshing boy be called the bastard king? I don't care whether it works or not. Bye bye, let's talk about it. I'm embarrassed and humble by being on the side [holding my chin] It's boring after watching too much. It has no content.
It was ok and sweet in the early stage [Rainbow Fart] I thought Gong was in love with Shou, but when Shou confessed, Gong had to take it easy to confirm whether his feelings for Shou were a medical condition [Hold your chin] If you are not sure, what was Xing doing to harass you before? [Question mark] Therefore, the pathological possessiveness between Gong and Shou not only did not add points to the plot, but made people choke on each other. It felt like it was not handled well.
The way to promote the plot is also relatively blunt [Hold your cheek] The psychiatrist actively exposed the doctor-patient relationship with Gong, which I can't accept at all. I feel that there is no professional ethics at all. I can completely find another way to discover Gong's mental illness [Hold my cheek]
The main cp is okay. Cookie, let's take a look at the entertainment industry. After all, there is widespread inflation in the entertainment industry nowadays such as movie stars, singers, kings, etc. Variety show settings cannot be considered in detail.
In terms of plot, after overcoming the disease and officially announcing the relationship, I thought it was over. I scrolled down the table of contents and found that there are quite a few chapters behind.
The deputy cp is average. I wrote it but didn't stand it up. I couldn't tell the difference between innocence and road at one point. Is Pei really stupid and blind? I personally don't like this character very much hhhhh, so when I saw the extra, Pei was a little bit broken.
I feel like the two of them are not very familiar with each other [question mark], and they don't have that sense of familiarity as if they were friends with each other.
I don't understand why Gong was forced to have a romantic persona. The reason is also ridiculous. I feel powerless because Gong is constantly being made pornographic rumors. And Shou's family is really unfavorable. In the end, I didn't fight back. [It turned out] Shou seems to have been miserable. After watching more than half of it, I finally ordered it all.
3.5 Are all gods with strange brain circuits, and their sudden and malicious intentions are a bit depressing overall. I'm not very happy to watch [cheek support]
Emo Shou is pretty cute, Gong is really miserable, except for the ending where Shou and Shou fall in love, nothing good happens. In the main text, Gong's situation is from the bottom of being bullied and targeted to an ordinary person. Even with the memory of the original work, there is only a limit to what ordinary people can do, because the main text only ends in high school, and Gong has not grown up yet, so it has never been very satisfying.
The emotional lines in the main text are not tasty either. The extras will taste better when you grow up.
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