It's pretty good, I just finished reading it in one sitting.
Let me talk about the advantages first. The subject matter is very new, at least for me. I have never read the article about Tiantianbao Temple before, so this book brought me some freshness.
The concept of Tiantianbao Temple is well digested in the article. It can be seen from the happy atmosphere in the school and the way everyone in the tennis club gets along. It is obvious that the author has a relatively thorough understanding of Tiantianbao Temple. There is no place where other people look like tools just for fun. Whether it's everyone in the tennis club or other students in the school who have spoken a little bit, they are all flesh and blood.
The emotional line of the article is acceptable, and it is considered to be a more delicate description. After reading the main text, the author has an extra chapter in the column, which is very well written.
Let's briefly talk about the disadvantages:
First of all, it is my personal little regret. It is the lack of game content. Whether it is the protagonist's awakening to Shura Shinto, or whether it is to practice and compete with others in order to improve oneself, it is basically covered in a vague way. It is obvious from the protagonist's ability that the author has designed it. As a result, the entire text does not describe a decent game, which is really a pity.
Let's move on to the second point. The plot transitions in this article are a bit stiff, and there are no turning points in some places, which makes it seem dry. This makes the entire article very fast-paced, and in many places it feels like you are swallowing the juicy stuff. And it also made problems with the author's writing that I wouldn't have cared about when I read the author's other writings more obvious.
Next, let me talk about my feelings throughout this article. As a reader who has read the author's other article "The Red-Haired Daughter of the Four Emperors...", The enthusiasm I felt in this article was not as much as that of the Four Emperors. This article is very much like an outline, and the pace is so fast that I felt like I was reading an outline written by the author. This caused me to calm down a little because of the blank space on the emotional scenes.
In addition, I am still chasing the author's Conan book. It can be seen that the author is still more suitable for writing long novels. Of course, the passion for writing fan fiction is also essential.
Summary: The article is readable and suitable for readers who don't want to watch too many games and just want to take a bite of cookies. The emotional line is fairly well written, and other parts are also okay. The part about Shitenbao Temple is also worth reading.
——2023.11.22.09.36
A good volleyball romance novel, each young couple is written very delicately, and the characters are interesting and novel. Except for a few chapters that are too short and lack description, the overall feeling of the article is very good. The writing is lively and natural, and the cookies are full of flavor. Thank you for the treat.
It's a very good cookie. My wife's research is very good, and Oda's description is spot on. BE Xiang's extra chapter really appeals to me. Life is full of possibilities, and happiness and regret are always there.
It's pretty good. Each world view is well set. The protagonist is like a swarm rat and can always bring something out of a dungeon. However, because of this, it feels a bit messy in the later stages.
Yes, the setting of the sanatorium is very good, and the core content of the article is well expressed. My wife's idea of wanting the heroes to have better protection and become their strong backing comes to mind. Thank you for your hospitality.
The setting is well integrated and there are many elements. It's a little too tight in terms of narrative pacing. In addition, the villain has been seeking death → involving the protagonist in the incident. To be honest, this process is a bit the same. So much so that I had no interest in reading the future tutoring chapter at the end, and only glanced at it briefly. This time-related setting only came out at the end of the full text, and it was predictably broken and chaotic.
It's a very good book, the setting is idealistic, but it makes people feel comfortable to read. The author still has some flaws in writing this textual research, and some rules have bugs. The writing style is humorous, and the team management is well written. It would be better if it could be written in more detail. The game is still too simple, and some of the extras are not finished.
2026.7.11 Saturday
I deliberately waited for the limited subscription period to end. It's a very good work. The characters are supported in a short space of time. During a World Cup match, that dreamlike moment of golden sequins spraying, everyone's emotions deeply resonate with the readers. The group portraits are excellent, and the extras make people feel sad, making people want to die drunk in that time and sleep with their dreams.
2026.4.21 18:00 Tuesday
It's a very good book. The author has precise control over the characters' personalities, especially the protagonist and Grinding, who are very well portrayed. The author definitely does research carefully and loves the characters he writes about. It's rare to be able to write the daily parts in a way that's not boring, the rhythm is good, and it's not empty. I like the adult side story very much. It immediately made the character of Sanae more grounded, and even the grinding became more vivid. All in all, it is a very good work. I read it in one sitting. I also collected the curse book, hoping to have the same comfortable reading experience as this one.
——2026.2.18.00:34. Wednesday
It's a very good book, with vivid daily writing. The heroine has a very full character, and she has really grown into an excellent person. The image of the female protagonist is established and inspires the male protagonist. A good character is very convincing and the author writes it really well.
2026.2.1
This book is finally finished, and I have been chasing it to the end.
It is well written, in a style with a strong Western fantasy flavor. Some paragraphs are complicated, gorgeous, and not straightforward, which makes the reading process a bit laborious and difficult to obtain the amount of information.
The author prefers to dig holes and hide settings, so there is little foreshadowing. This is more obvious in the last few chapters when the protagonist makes a comeback, and only reveals some settings such as character experiences at the last moment. At this time, the setting seems straightforward again, which conflicts with the gorgeous writing and increases the reading threshold a lot.
The update of this article was unstable during the serialization period. So far, there are still unfinished extras, and there are also many typos in this article, which undoubtedly added a lot of bad experience to this book.
This book is relatively excellent in terms of background setting and expansion of the world view. The description of the characters is also very vivid. The narrative has a grand side, but also has minute details in terms of infrastructure. The final ending's praise and return of human beings has raised the purpose of this article to a higher level.
Overall, it is a good book to read. I hope that the author's future works will go further in details such as sentences and words. I look forward to future works.
2025.11.9
Gintama has a very authentic flavor, and it blends in well with themes such as Fumino Conan without any sense of inconsistency. The character's personality is accurately grasped, and the feeling that even if life is not smooth sailing, he can still be free and open-minded and nonsensical really comes to mind. The success of Amway has come to me, so I will go and finish the Gintama (laughs). Still because of the short story, there are some places that are not well described, but it's not harmful. I look forward to the next work.
Compared with the book of Yamini, this book is not well written. The main character, Shinichi, has too few highlights and the writing is not clear. I am a protagonist fan, and my stance is to follow the protagonist. The perspective of this book is partially biased towards Yamini. Unlike the book of Yamini, Yuki and Yamini are essentially the same person, and they are one and the same, so my overall impression of this book is not good, but I still like Shinichi very much!
——2025.1.6
I basically read it in one sitting, it's a very good book. The setting of Wanshiwuwu is interesting, and the main line of life is set up exquisitely. Except for Cuscuta, which I quickly skipped, the other senses are very good. The character design is also very good, the emotional line is okay, and the fact that Huamanlou cultivates immortality is quite unexpected. There are quite a lot of sub-CPs in the article, and the length is acceptable. It doesn't have the flavor of traditional martial arts. There aren't many characters in the original work, but it fits the tone of Wanshiwuwu.
It is a very good book with a novel subject matter. It is rare to see works with a game life setting, but the setting of the protagonist's final identity and becoming the King of Gold has become common again.
There are many comprehensive themes, well integrated, no sense of conflict, and well written.
The portrayal of Ranpo is super good! The character is well understood, and the abilities are not as extraordinary as those of ordinary fans. The emotional drama with the protagonist is full of tension, delicate and touching.
The author has sufficient research and grasps the details well. It would be better if the writing was better. There are many works used, and the writing is actually quite messy in some places, but it's supported by the settings, so it's not bad.
Thanks for the treat, keep up the good work!
——2024.8.29.07:20
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