There are too many typos. It can be seen that the author wanted to depict a certain plot, but then the design was not good. It feels like you are holding back halfway and got discouraged. The depiction is not done well. There are even a lot of inexplicable foreshadowings, and you jump out of it. After reading a few chapters, I can't stand it anymore. I am not that kind of noob. The writing is hard to make people interested in reading. The plot is clear and you can guess it without even reading. I only want to say that the characters in the first ten chapters I read feel a bit split. The descriptions and plots of the characters show that I can barely read the later parts [change][change][change]