It is well written, the infrastructure setting is very logical, and the author allows us to see another possibility. The most ruthless emperor's family, but the family love in this article is written so beautifully and vividly. The little prince uses his childlike and cute brain circuits to change everyone's lives in unexpected ways.
My wife's description of the characters is really good, and the protagonist is really an interesting person. The plot is a little lacking, and some blood-pressure-raising moments could be omitted. The pace was a little slow, and the reading experience declined in the later stages, which made people tired. I put it off for a while before continuing. Overall, it's a good article.
The writing is okay, and the early setting and foreshadowing are well presented. The middle and later parts are a bit messy, and I feel that the author has no patience. Give it one more star for the setting. It's a pity that the extra chapter is not finished.
The character design is very good, and the whole story does not deviate from the setting except for the extra chapters. It is a heartthrob with some convincing.
The setting is very novel. The protagonist can become a person through acting, and the corresponding settings will become reality. It is considered an atypical novel. It's a rare majiawen that doesn't use a sword, and the idol setting is also well integrated.
It's very beautiful, and the wife combined all the elements very well. This is my first time reading Bai He Wen, and I have a very good experience, and there is no sense of inconsistency in the first person narrative. This is the third wife's article I've read, which is quite rare.
The overall writing is okay, with a high concentration and a lot of fun. It's quite interesting. The emotional line is average, all supported by the characters, but this is a short story, so it doesn't hurt.
It's quite good-looking. The author clearly understands what the readers who come here want to see. The rhythm of the story is not sluggish, the writing is interesting, the emotional line is quite inexplicable, and the writing style is average.
Well written, Mrs. Zong Xin's writing has a strong storytelling feel. I was a little uncomfortable at first, but the reading experience got better and better after that. This article shows that the Ma couple are getting together well, which is really a happy result.
The writing is quite good, the CP between Fei Jia and Ayanokouji is very interesting, and the emotional drama turns a bit abrupt, but because of some of the author's own settings, it's harmless.
It's a very interesting book, and it's a type of comic book that I like very much. There are also elements that I like such as vests, animation broadcasts, audience interaction, and forums. It is a book that I like in every aspect.
The author is really good at playing some jokes that the otakus who often watch animation will know, which makes people smile.
However, there are still some problems in some plots, mainly in the three chapters where real-life relatives and friends who have been reviewed by other finalists appear, because the previous animations were watched from the perspective of the protagonist, and the interactive barrage mode was also added. The real-life relatives and friends of the protagonist were suddenly revealed without any foreshadowing. Even though the two of them were chatting while watching the animation, as a reader, I was still unfamiliar with the protagonist's relatives and friends who suddenly appeared, so I felt a little disgusted with these two people.
The biggest problem is that before this, the author has written the interaction between the protagonist and the people in the animation protagonist group very well. In my opinion, the five people including the protagonist are the closest to each other (even if two of them are the protagonist's vests), the sudden appearance of relatives and friends who seem to be closer to the protagonist really makes people feel like: 'Why did you run out to steal the scene?'
In the final analysis, there was no foreshadowing before that the protagonist has relatives and friends in the present world, and the plot of his relatives and friends are waiting for him, so it is very abrupt. If there was no foreshadowing, it should have been brushed off. Fortunately, the plot involving relatives and friends only lasts three chapters, and then the perspective switches back to the protagonist.
In addition, there are also some writing problems, such as some incoherent sentences, but since it is already finished, the author is not forced to revise the text.
All in all, it's a very good article, I like it very much. I'm really looking forward to the third season of SOB!
——2026.2.22.07:51. Sunday
A very cute article with a very novel setting. The cat vests are interactive and cute, and the portrayal of the protagonist's high school life is okay. The worldview setting is also relatively complete and remarkable.
The shortcomings are also obvious. First of all, although the tone of the article is more children's literature and childlike, some of the content is still not well described because of the author's lack of writing skills. For example, in the early stage where the main character, Ma Jia, interacted with his friends, there was no foreshadowing of his friend's character at the beginning, which led to a problem with his behavior that led to a decline in perception.
Also because of the tone of the whole article, there is basically no dark content in the article. For example, when looking for official personnel, there was no suspicion or the like, and it was easy to gain trust. The villain is not very smart, which sometimes makes people feel quite absurd. However, because of the tone of this article, I won't raise too many issues in this area.
To sum up, the article is readable and suitable for relaxing and passing the time.
———— 2024.8.26 18:11
A very good vest story, with a novel setting and great imagination. This combination of random characters, personalities, and abilities is very interesting.
I prefer the world of Satoru and Ayumi. This combination is surprisingly good-looking. The author also carefully constructed the story of the vest to make it reasonable and complete.
What's left is that the main plot and events are a bit dull. While the vest gives a sense of surprise, it will also make people feel a little tired and gradually lose interest in reading. The author focused most of his energy on the construction of the vest. Compared with the experience of writing the vest itself, the story seems dull. Moreover, the writing is a bit sluggish, which further aggravates the feeling of fatigue.
All in all, I like this article very much. I hope the author will work harder to improve his writing skills. I look forward to the next work.
2024.7.28 22:42
It's good. I finished another book written by my wife.
As a reader who has read a lot of Ke Tong, the perspective of this book is quite new to me. It is not stuck on the main plot, but focuses on daily cases rarely written by Jinjiang fans. With the core of saving regrets, the entire writing context is paved.
The author has always been good at character design. He is very lovable from beginning to end, and there is nothing to discourage him from interacting with the original characters.
So far it's pretty good, the rest are just some minor issues and my personal regrets.
The first is the unavoidable problem of this article, the pace is slightly fast. This point was also reflected in the previous Xilaixi article, and this one is more serious than that one.
The main problem is that the clues and characters interweaving the case are too full and too complicated. And because the main plot of this article is to save these characters, the protagonist seems to be on a rush, without leaving much time for readers to breathe. It is better when I follow the serial. If I start reading when this article is finished, this will be a weight for me to go further on the road of abandoning the article.
In fact, such a length made me have the idea of abandoning the article when I was following the series. Fortunately, when I had this idea, the author said that it would be finished and not enter the main plot, which just happened to keep me in my footsteps, which is also an interesting thing.
The length of this article is a plus, but the ending is actually not very good. Some things are not explained. The problems of the winery and what will happen after magic is allowed to be studied are left as blanks at the end.
Of course, this kind of treatment has advantages. A high EQ means that it leaves room for imagination for readers and avoids being too long and cumbersome. A low EQ means that the subsequent plot will not be easy to develop. After all, the protagonist is very interested in it, and the plot of Shinichi becoming Conan has been harmonized. No matter how it develops, it is nothing more than letting the protagonist cheat and solve it from the source like in the article.
As for the author's new attempt, which is to write pure friendship without cp to eliminate ambiguity, I think it is done very well. I am very happy to witness the author's progress. Please continue to work hard.
Finally, let me summarize: the setting is acceptable, and it has a great impact on the original work; the characters are acceptable, persuasive, and stand up; the length is acceptable, and it is in a fairly just right position; the ending is okay, and it would be better if the explanation is more complete.
——2024.1.13.10.12
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