Sweet Ancient Words

13 春 Revlon in the Spring Breeze Shen AiRomance1.4M WordsCompleted 93kFavorites274.5kClicks/ch201.5kNutrition

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No loss in investing! The emotional line between Lao Zhou and Mom in this article is really delicate and touching. As I read it, I often started to imagine the relationship between the two of them in my mind. Aiba is really good at writing emotional lines and grasping the readers. The war scenes and plot lines in the article are also rare and dazzling performances in female channel articles. This is my favorite novel in the Jinjiang ancient language area and has been read the most times in the past two years. I will read it again after it is finished. There are three shortcomings in the ointment. First, the problem of discontinuous updates. This article has been interrupted and updated many times, and there have been many times when I didn't write a request for leave and didn't update it. I hope Aibo will pay more attention to this issue in future writing. 2. The second half is a bit weak. I feel that some of the foreshadowing in the previous article was not fulfilled. The plot of blindness and amnesia can be reconsidered. The reunion was not as exciting as I personally imagined. In fact, many small foreshadowings and supporting characters in the article were not revealed in the end. For example, Tuoba Agu, I thought he would be a very powerful character, but in the end, he did not appear in the follow-up. The creation of the villain can be more thoughtful. 3. The issue of plot length for small characters. The writing of minor characters makes this article appear fuller, but the length of Yu Jia's chapters in the middle and late stages is too lengthy, further delaying readers' expectations for the climax of the article. All in all, it is still a very, very, very good work. I hope Aibo will continue to work hard and create more and better romance novels!