It's good-looking. It's a rare example of recycling a plot and ending it right away instead of repeating the main line of the original work. It doesn't feel like it ends abruptly, and the reader doesn't feel tired while reading.
After reading this, I planned to go into the author's column to look for food. As soon as I came in, eh? When was the author of the collection [question mark] maybe I forgot to click on it just now?
Looking at the recent serialization, the copy mentioned a friend's book. . . Oh, my friend is pretty awesome. I've read this copy before. . . Scroll down. . . Hey [question mark] Where is the copy of this article? What? That was the copy of this article [question mark]. What other books have you written? Eh? Fighting for the big stage? Plants vs. Curses?
Only then did I realize that Liu Chu [Joker] had just read an early short story.
[Hold your chin] I thought I found a new granary [Hold your chin]
Ss + original Ravenclaw girl, a novice author? The front is not good, the more you write, the better. The current progress is to write until the end of the war, and the emotional line of the male and female protagonists is stuck at a node. I am not sure whether the author can control the later parts, but the description of emotions at this stage just finished is very good, so it is currently a pitfall, (although the author said that it has not fooled [Dog Head] yet), but it does not prevent me from recommending it.
I highly praise this article, but the author may be a bit unskilled in the previous section. The main text is complete, but the second chapter is missing. The heroine has bipolar disorder