To make up for it, I almost accidentally watched it again. I like to pile up words. There is not much information in one chapter. The characters are well-shaped, like a domestic entertainment fairy tale. The most important thing is that it is too boring as a story.
I'm so disappointed. The most prominent part of the text was not written well, and the plot line is also childish. You can see what the author wants to express. Unfortunately, it is written like a slogan. Only the male protagonist's stress due to his mother's difficult childbirth is a bit touching.
The early writing is quite good and makes people want to read it. But in the later stage, it was a little too fast to progress with the plot line. Every supporting character was just a tool, and there was no desire to take a serious look at the foreshadowing of some established results and routines. The emotional scenes are actually very interesting, but there are too few, and the most anticipated horse fall is not very foreshadowing.
What's even more annoying is that the extra story actually includes a plot. How much do you like your plot and these supporting characters? . . Originally I was just reading the extra story to illustrate a plot that was not included in the main text, but in the end I was still writing those plots and they were not written very well. After reading the extra chapter, I really felt a senseless fire and was powerless.
The plot is really good, and the writing is really boring. The quarrel between the male and female protagonists is too similar to the heterosexuality on Sweet Potato [Eh~]
If you want to see RPG breakthrough and upgrade [Rainbow Fart]
Then you will see that 90% of the early stage is about picking up trash and upgrading, and in the last few dozen chapters, new areas, new settings, and new bosses are introduced, and the boss is solved in one chapter.
If you want to watch love and watch men flirt with each other [question mark], then you will see the obvious difference in shaping belike:
① Qin is so aloof and dismissive that the heroine knows him unilaterally. After being rescued, this cold flower falls in love at the speed of light and is madly in love, not to mention the inexplicable love scene between the real and fake daughter that even the heroine is a bit shy and abrupt.
②We have only met Wei a few times before the chapter about the true daughter. He has secret feelings for his sister in a place that readers cannot see. He actually has such uncontrollable feelings towards his sister. It is really suspenseful!
③The only normal foreshadowing is Zheng. The former is obviously favored by the heroine for special treatment, while the latter has a smoother emotional arc with obvious changes.
④ I have been waiting for the perspective of Qin and Wei after reading the whole story. I really want to know how they are in love, but it ends like this. The extra chapter will be discussed later, and I will identify why the popular male guests want to write but are unwilling to talk about it. You are happy. Readers are confused. Is it true? If you don't lack the money for those chapters, please be sure to add them next time.
If you want to watch suspense [Joker]
In the last few dozen chapters, Raging Waves unfolds and tells everyone that there is a different world. The vacation dungeon introduces a bunch of new NPCs at once. In the last few chapters, Lightspeed explains the world view, upgrades, monsters, and falling in love in one go. According to the distribution, this should be a snake with a tail. The most suspenseful thing is actually why the male protagonists are like that
One point is deducted for the portrayal of the male protagonist, which is completely blank and has no memory points. After watching it, I only remember that the competition-level white man is dazzling and depressed.
One point will be deducted for the transition to the ending. First of all, let me say that I like to watch He who takes He by force, but the look and feel of this book is too fragmented. If you want to write He where two people have the same mind, why not set the stage earlier, at least write a heart-to-heart talk for the two of them to talk about. . .
In fact, I still feel that the essence of rape and robbery has not been written, and there is no strong love to death. The whole reading process feels like the male protagonist is like a funny cat. The two of them are flirting with each other with great energy. The author's writing style cannot be faulted, but I really don't know where the problem lies. . .
The characters are relatively novel, and the plot is very boring. After I stopped following the series for a while, I lost the mood to watch it. It's so sweet.
What is written here. . .
The experience is like chasing avemujica. In the beginning, it was quite serious but had some shortcomings. The second volume started to add some clever ideas. The third volume is about to end and it still makes this super handsome man pinch and scold. The charm of the character is reflected by driving, and the male ghost is written as a wretched man. It even added new settings near the end, such as the heroine's native family and the hero's deity crossing the tribulation. People have to wonder if this book really has an outline?
Keep practicing, really
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