Very good, the overall style is more funny (meaning the audience laughs and the protagonist feels tired)
The foreshadowing of the main plot of the article is quite clear, but the final boss is quite surprising.
On the emotional line, the protagonist seems to be a ruthless person (excellent graduate [like]), and there is also a failure case (a close friend who practiced the ruthless path turned to demon cultivation)
The extra chapter is also quite interesting, but it lacks the emotional line of a close friend. It's a pity, I really want to watch it [cheek support]
Not bad, the pace may be a bit tight
The protagonist's predecessor is the system
The latter part of the article is the general trend of official cooperation between the two worlds.
There are a lot of bonus extras, but some pitfalls have not been filled in
Western fantasy growth story, the protagonist has traveled through time, and in the beginning he only knows that he is not a human being
The protagonist is a bit of a loser. In the beginning, his first priority is to avoid trouble, but he will make progress later on.
The final outcome is that the protagonist can travel freely between the two worlds
Like??
Conan fanfic and horse fiction.
The protagonist has three vests, each of which has its own strongly related role. The main body lives among the crowd like ordinary people and will not participate in the plot.
The protagonist's mission is to sell goods, collect souls, and fabricate the existence of gods for people with high-purity souls.
Four members of the police academy team survive; the organization is destroyed, some characters remain, and even Gin can appear openly.
Demining: 1. The squad leader was on a date, and Hagiwara died (it seemed like it had been too long and he had forgotten);
2. There will be misunderstandings about the plot of "Black Vest falls in love with Curly Hair";
3. There will be brothers making rice bowls, and the description of Zhufu brothers falling in love with the protagonist's female vest "Yuko"
Not bad, the article is set in the occult setting, the protagonist accidentally traveled from the normal world, and as the name suggests, all the characters are evil. There is no obvious connection between the protagonist and anyone in the article, or even none.
The protagonist is the kind of person who devotes all his attention to the things he likes, and has only one ultimate goal - to go home.
Demining: 1. There is a heterosexual sub-CP, the woman is a yandere type, and this pair of CPs has a greater relationship with the protagonist's method of returning home (I write this mainly because some people don't like sub-CPs that take up too much content in the article, not to exclude heterosexuality);
2. All of them are really evil people