As an 18-year-old writer, I can see that the writing style is still green, but the character design is so cute that it matches the young couple perfectly. The overall story is very coherent and the concept is very good! The overall flaws are not concealed ~
The writing style is a little childish, but the characters are so cool. This daddy-guided attack is so cool! Really take good care of your wife [Prick-eared Rabbit Head] [Yellow Heart]
