A relatively rare infrastructure document covering agriculture, industry, transportation, education, medical care, military, culture and other fields. There is almost no plot in this long novel of nearly 1 million words. However, the writing style is not stable in the early stage, but it gradually gets better in the later stage. There are relatively few emotional lines. It is difficult to write in the early stage. The ambiguous period is not good at writing, but the old married couple period after Shou ascends the throne is okay.
The prince of the feudal lord is transformed into a powerless one by the start. He must first deal with the mini-boss and control the power of the fiefdom. He can then start growing potatoes and cotton in the fiefdom, increase food production, improve farming methods, make salt, iron, glass, paper, and build factories, schools and other public facilities. Facilities, technological innovation, recruitment and training of the army, modification of weapons to make gunpowder, extraction of penicillin... Queen Qin was granted the title of King Dong'an to rule the eight states, building roads, water conservancy, establishing logistics systems, running newspapers, preparing war reserves, and preparing for war. The war part is relatively small, because the reputation is too high, there is nothing to fight haha. Shou ascended the throne smoothly, used the new policies implemented in the fiefdom to govern the country, improved the status of women, implemented the same examination system for men and women, allowed women to serve as officials, innovated ideas, established universities and libraries, revised laws, promoted paper currency, expanded territory, and sailed on oceans... And then there was retirement life. Shou passed the throne to his younger sister. The Queen hahaha I love her so much!
It's a particularly cool infrastructure story, but there are a lot of cannon fodder to reduce intelligence in the early stage, there are many unnecessary slaps in the face, and there are a lot of flaws in the early stage. I like the part after ascending to the throne the most. Suffering is very charming. The author's writing is the smoothest in this part, and the emotional lines of attacking and receiving are also the best.
3 Points for writing, 4 points for plot, and 2 points for emotional line. The main reason is that such complete infrastructure articles are too rare, so I'll give it five stars.
As an infrastructure article, the infrastructure part is pretty good. The protagonist is a little scientific genius. Each invention states the required raw materials and the trial-and-error R&D process. Compared with other infrastructure articles, it is relatively professional and detailed. The protagonist travels back in time to a dynasty where vassal kings separatist and aristocratic families have monopoly. The previous travelers left a lot of mess and system to the protagonist. The protagonist passed the system assessment and became the great son of the declining sect. The system will issue tasks, and the protagonist can get rewards for completing the tasks. However, the system is not used much, and the protagonist's own research and development capabilities are stronger than the technological level that the system can achieve.
The protagonist made a deal with Gong to get his own city, and then started building crazy infrastructure in his territory. In agriculture, they raise pigs, grow potatoes, cotton, corn, sweet potatoes, build dams, irrigation canals, water dragons, etc. In terms of industry, there are chemical fertilizers, paper making, salt making, glass, steel pouring method, crucible steelmaking, cement, reinforced concrete, flying shuttle looms, assembly line operation mode, etc. In terms of food processing, there are soybean oil, tofu, soy sauce, braised pork, potato chips, French fries, sugar, and there are quite a lot of food descriptions. Daily necessities include soap, toothpaste, shampoo, shower gel, cotton cloth, mirrors, etc. These are mainly used by aristocratic families to make money. In terms of weapons, there are fire cannons, gunpowder, and rifled cannons. The protagonist also built a steam engine, and then invented steamboats and trains. He has single-handedly raised the technological level of this era.
I also like the protagonist's bloody life experience, +1 point for this.
Lightning points:
1. The author's narrative rhythm is chaotic, and he frequently uses interjections, background introductions and memories to fill the space. The main line is fragmented and the timeline is messy. The main plot often strays off track, and I write whatever comes to mind without prioritizing it, which exposes the author's deficiencies in narrative structure and rhythm control.
2. There are many typos and grammatical errors, the format is confusing, and the reading experience is poor. The author obviously has not revised the article and is not responsible for the readers.
3. The character creation is weak and the characters are generally intellectually dull.
4. After working hard for a long time, Gong's father, Gong, Gong's younger brother finally became the emperor. Shou has food, weapons, funds, and strategies. Many of the tactics were also thought up by Shou during the final battle for the world. He can definitely recruit and train his own troops to conquer the world. I don't understand the family whose throne was ultimately given to him. Everyone in the Feng family is hard to criticize. First of all, Feng's father is impulsive, short-sighted, and only fights with reckless men without strategies. Gong's younger brother is a cunt, the rest of the Feng family is ungrateful, and Gong doesn't trust Shou wholeheartedly. Moreover, in the eyes of the world, the Mo family is a vassal of the Feng family. Anyway, this is how the author feels to me. All the reputation has been taken up by the Feng family, and everything they have done has become a wedding dress for the Feng family. I have read a lot of articles on infrastructure, about being an emperor and being an emperor, but they are all very reasonable and logical. Unlike this article, which always gave me the feeling of being an emperor, it turned out to be a big deal, because this article was just a background, without any charm, and the characters were not three-dimensional. The Feng family is a group of people, and they have no ability to govern the world. When I saw the ending, I just felt that the world was over.
5. CP is very difficult to write, and it is better not to write the emotional line.
Overall, there are serious flaws in the narrative, characters, and logic. The flaws are not covered up, and the author will continue to work hard.
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