I love to read cool articles, control the main character, and record the reasons for following articles and abandoning them. Love is a condiment that can only be served in competitions!
Newcomer, new article, rarely doing any extravagant work on Golden Finger, pure talent.
The protagonist is a Belgian, the club Ajax-Barcelona (very rare). He is very kind-hearted and has a high degree of socialization. It may also be because he is relatively young and has a big brother in the national team, so he is honest and actively defends as a forward. But, [I am a comparison person after all. Jpg], I look forward to the follow-up development.
The main plot is relatively bland, well, it's just about playing football. There isn't any strong dramatic conflict, and the physical experience is a bit confusing. But the game was well written, with many beautiful descriptions of the protagonist's wonderful performances and flashes of inspiration on the field. The forum comments and reactions after the game were also very delicious.
Cp Azar, the author seems to be a human being. Yysy Azar has always been a comedian in Jinjiang fandom, which makes me a little bit intolerant...
Imagination/short story/expanded writing, mixed with evil flavor. Free article plus one star.
Some of the ideas are really interesting. There are a lot of forum descriptions, a lot of persecution of players, and a few football matches found among a lot of football memes. Jpg
Recommended trial reading [No one notified me] #Brain was brutally cleansed and transformed into a poisonous woman, why does Mei Lingge act arrogantly and pursue whatever he wants after being humiliated? This is a relatively long article. The main character is Xiao Han, who played well in the World Cup, and Barcelona's if line persecution of Ke Sheng is even more delicious.
Diversity, all kinds of lalang
A new article by the author of "The Last Red and Black", a coaching article.
The author's writing style is still relatively bland. The first few chapters didn't appeal to me. When I picked it up, I found that it was quite to my liking. The writing of the game is getting better and better. From the beginning, it was as heartbroken as the protagonist's, and then it gradually became passionate. However, I feel that coaching articles are not as exciting as writing about games from the perspective of players. The fun part of coaching articles is in transforming/scraping lottery tickets/cultivating little monsters, but this article touches less on it.
In terms of career development, there is no golden finger. You are not the type to win all the time, but to climb up gradually. At the beginning, he directly took over the British team, and after (suffering a lot of hardships) achieved results, he coached a small team to a wealthy team, which is more realistic. It doesn't shy away from conflicts between players, nor does it downplay the undercurrents between the coach and the FA/team chairman, but it is handled more blandly and less dramatically, and the reading experience may not be as refreshing.
There is no cp, the protagonist has the attributes of being sick and weak, but in fact he has a devilish nature (?), And his players have been trained for a long time and are a little bit shaken (?). The protagonist's character is still rare in football articles, and it attracts me more [love eyes]
Editor 2: The protagonist is so hot, I really like this [love eyes]
I must have read a little bit, but I don't know why I have no impression, so I'm scratching my head.
Now that I think about it, it seems that I abandoned the story after seeing my sister's storyline. The family's storyline was too heavy and I wasn't very interested.
I heard that there were some surprises in the extra chapter, so I didn't bother to finish reading it, so I gave it up anyway.
I liked the previous one, the growth is well written, and the heartthrob is quite reasonable. But when I saw it was said later that I would be able to play IMART, I [turned]. I thought it was just a spiritual succubus. Abandoned
Free article, new article for newcomers, the author is super hard-working, I hope it won't be a scam
The protagonist is suspected of being Kesheng's young son who is living outside, and Kesheng's version of his grandfather is with him. The competition is well written, and you can see that the author has worked hard on some details. A growing protagonist, both on and off the field, who plays logically and uses his brain. When describing the previous relationships between the protagonist and other people, it can also be seen that the author is cautious and thoughtful, and has very delicate feelings.
Cp Maldini
Editor 2: The pacing is really slow, and it's not very exciting at the same time. [Spreading hands] I feel like some of the competitions could actually be omitted and the plot could be developed as quickly as possible. But after all, it is a free article, and it cannot be said that the author is a literary scholar. It is more like that the author wants to present the details of the research to the readers again after conducting research. I didn't expect that textual research could actually bring negative effects here... Jijiji, I am the King of Jiji [brain pick]
Free articles, but I don't know what the scam is.
The fourth day disaster type football article, the protagonist is invincible.
It's very refreshing, but it mainly depends on other people's reactions and side descriptions. There aren't many descriptions of the front of the stadium, so it's suitable for dessert, not suitable for a meal. There are extras to the author's column.
No cp but countless single arrows
Completed. Light comedy style, group portraits and daily writing.
The interaction between the Milan family is very warm, the writing is interesting, and there is a natural sense of humor. The experience of following updates is great, and I give it five stars overall.
The only drawback is that the description of the game is relatively weak, and there are no impressive games or championships. It weakens the conflict between the players and the club and covers the original conflicts in an idealized way, which is more flattering, but considering the overall light comedy style of the full text, it is a sacrifice required for adaptation.
The column has extras which are very interesting
No cp
Free article, fate update, second person
The protagonist has a very unique personality, a gentle saint-child type with extremely high moral values, and there are many psychological descriptions, so he will be more persuaded to quit.
The game is average but the writing style is really delicious, so I'll keep up with it.
Cp Klopp
It should be about football, but only in the early stage. In the later stage, the author only writes about racing. At present, it seems that the author has lost control of the plot, and is now a bit too high-spirited; but the emotional line is different, it has been too wild from the beginning.
It is recommended that the author stop updating for a while and make an outline if he really can't. Don't beat your head and write the plot like this. I always think of changing teams and changing CPs as soon as they come out. Many developments really have no foreshadowing at all, and there is no follow-up. I have no idea what the significance is. Chasing articles every day is like opening a blind box, my face is confused [split]
I'm still following it because the subject matter is rare.
CP Verstappen, the protagonist once had a one-way crush on a non-CP partner
The front is very funny and very interesting. In the middle of the game, I personally felt that the jokes were too repetitive, and I didn't see any improvement in the protagonist's skills, so I abandoned the article.
You can read it as a joke
No cp
It is a good-looking article, a rare trinity of coach + chairman + team doctor, with a lot of fun and jokes.
Semi-fictional, no real names, but there are prototypes. I really laughed out loud when I saw that the author pinched two Melo prototypes and got seriously injured, and they were loaned to the protagonist team to recuperate and work part-time to play football.
Can be read as a business simulation article
No cp
The meme is good, but the game is not that exciting and the writing is average. When I read the article, I really couldn't tell what the main character's characteristics were, and his personality was rather flat and had no characteristics.
The emotional line is a bit baffling
abandoned
cp Mueller
The protagonist is an underage vampire, and in the eyes of others, Bai Yueguang is a bit of a heartthrob.
It is a football story with a slightly unique flavor. It is slightly literary in the early youth training period, and focuses on an original friend. It is a bit confusing, but it is okay after starting to play in the first team.
Second Editor: Why did you start writing about the protagonist who has a crush on the protagonist again? [Joker] Isn't this a football article? I don't want to see how the protagonist is having an affair with others! At present, the protagonist's image has become a stubborn personality in my eyes. If you don't take the initiative or refuse, I will take 99 steps back. Is it okay if a football man who doesn't play football loses his right to love?
Cp Gerrard, but there are many single arrows
11.8 Sad news: The author is going to take the college entrance examination.
You can watch it, but it's a bit tasteless and it's a pity to throw it away. The protagonist's golden finger allows him to go back to the past and experience playing football, but it's hard to tell what the protagonist has learned. Some settings (such as loving to learn but being a scumbag) didn't work, and the author didn't know how to write it. Logically speaking, this book could be more exciting. I hope the author can outline it carefully.
No cp
Editor 2: Sad news on 11.8: Updates have been suspended for a month
Part Three: Entered the Palace
Free article updates are unstable, new articles for newcomers
Writing about a protagonist who relies on his brains to play football depends on the author's IQ. This book does that, so the game is very interesting to watch.
The protagonist's time to play football is this year. I don't know how the author is going to write it [covering face, laughing and crying]
No cp
Editor 2: Sad news on 11.8: Updates have been suspended for a month