It's quite good as a refreshing article. However, the images of Zai and Shou are not three-dimensional enough, and the frequency of Shou's appearance decreases in the middle and later stages. Maybe it is because Shou and Shou's plot is over and there is nothing to write about, so it becomes a background board. In the later period, Shou's feeling of being a little pampered is OOC. Zai originally had a cute little meatball image, but after the episode he became a love brain, he couldn't stand it, but he still bought Orz in order to fully subscribe. I always feel that the author has laid out the plot many times that the two of them should have a child. I was looking forward to Xiaotuanzi No. 2, But it ended unexpectedly. I thought it was in the extra story, so I endured my discomfort with some plots and bought it, but I still didn't see Xiaotuanzi No. 2 Tut
The plot is mindless and cool, I still quite like it. But the unclearly explained abilities and organizations are like Doraemon's magic pocket, which can do anything, which is outrageous. The romance setting and the later conflict with the princess who gave birth to a baby out of wedlock and fought in battle all year round are a bit dramatic. The princess writes that she has a love brain and can reject the male protagonist's request for marriage, promote her child to the highest political position among ancient women, or use the pretense of a love brain to take advantage of the situation and become the final winner.
The story is a very simple and enjoyable story, but there are too many typos in the middle and later stages. Even the last name of the villain in the early stage was changed later...