I can give this article a four-star rating overall. There are certain highlights in the early stage, including the settings. Later in the writing, I felt that it was not spread out enough, the copy shrank, and it was a bit top-heavy, but not to the point where it started but ended. After the two began to fall in love, the description of the emotional scenes became a bit cumbersome (not that the emotional scenes were cumbersome, but the descriptions were used in words). Of course, this is purely my personal perception. Overall it's okay.
The plot of each dungeon is pretty good, but I feel that there is a little bit of foreshadowing for the protagonist's secret in the early stage, but overall it's okay.
Overall, this is a pretty good article. The first copy is well written, and it is quite satisfying to earn national fortunes and rescue China from disaster. However, the latter part is relatively dull, because the protagonist has a force value that can be called a dimensionality reduction strike. The rest of the story basically relies on force to push back, and whoever refuses to accept will be beaten, so there are no surprises or surprises from a plot perspective. It can be seen that the author worked hard on the emotional line, hahaha, it is relatively slow to develop, and it is not until the end that there is big progress. Overall this article is okay
The setting of the dungeon is really exciting. There is always a reversal in the process of breaking the game, which is quite interesting. The protagonist can basically be said to be almost a demon with infinite strategy and wisdom. There are also some things that are not pleasant. Although the pretty boy's skills are set to pretend to be weak, the other people in the live barrage and the comments scolding the protagonist for being weak are a bit too depressing and too blunt and deliberate. It is purely for the sake of blackening the protagonist.
It's really good-looking. Objectively speaking, the description of the dream realm at the beginning was a bit off-topic, so I felt that I couldn't construct a coherent and complete picture in my mind, so I was a bit uncomfortable. However, the writing was very good after that, and the decryption process was also wonderful and interlocking. Only by watching the end can I understand why the emotional line of the two protagonists is so profound. In the early stage, I just felt it was relatively warm, but later I realized that it was really vigorous.