I record the articles that I personally feel are not good-looking. When I read these articles, I can't focus at all and make me eager to read on. I just want to switch to other apps and play something else.
Based on the tweets, I can only say that I have high expectations but even greater disappointment. A very serious shortcoming is that the heroine's character has always been unclear, and her character, words and deeds have no roots of her own. It can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into describing the characteristics of the male protagonist who is free and easy to take care of, but it is a little greasy, and the wandering part in the middle has the shadow of youth pain magazine literature. The story from the separation after the college entrance examination to the reunion is not as well written as the school days. It is hard to imagine that a pair of childhood sweethearts would be like strangers even if they separated. It is very strange. Moreover, it describes the boring life of the heroine after work and then reunites. It feels like the heroine only contacts the hero again for fun. In addition, the main text does not include any words about the friendship with Su Yu, so why is there an inexplicable extra chapter? There is no sense of immersion in the book at all, as if you are watching a character who appears suddenly. It would be better to dismantle the plot of the friendship episode and integrate it into the main text. Finally, the author is really a bit arrogant, very, very, very fond of preaching, and has a strong sense of preaching. Very thoughtful long comment, please don't delete me [Chigua]
The fixed routines are nothing new, and the writing style is more straightforward than a running account. No matter what the book recommenders say, I will never read Six Blind Stars again. Every time I think I will make progress this time, in fact, I have already exhausted my talents.
The character background and emotional lines are childish, and the emotional changes cannot stand up to scrutiny. It can be felt that the author wanted to write in a relaxed and funny style, but his writing skills are too poor. What is the relationship between the text and childhood sweethearts? Why is it tagged? ? ? It is also an article whose quality is completely unworthy of the data.
This kind of opening that deliberately creates dramatic tension is really lovv. No matter how many foreshadowings there are and how many secrets and difficulties there are in the follow-up, it is not the reason for the male protagonist to have sex with the female protagonist who was almost a stranger at the time. In addition, some paragraphs and comment sections have a really scary atmosphere when it comes to content that will obviously cause discomfort to female readers. Many people feel uncomfortable, but they are still applauding. Book fans will only talk about copywriting demining, but they will also say that both male and female protagonists have character flaws. Can't you tell the difference between character flaws and the legal bottom line? Character flaws are not a fig leaf for wx behavior. Regarding this kind of article, many people say it is the top 1 topic in 2025. It is humorous [comparison]
The writing style of xxs Chronicles, the background of the male protagonist designed for the so-called "high-ranking cadres" actually does not feel like a high-ranking cadre novel at all, the understanding of depression is also very superficial, very superficial, and the plot is bland and boring, very ordinary.
The setting of the male protagonist's life experience is too miserable, and his father was not publicly rehabilitated in the end, which was very unpleasant. The setting after regaining his sight was also a bit suspended, which was too exaggerated. The heroine's mother and brother were really bastards and they were cleared in the end. Um, the writing is not bad, can you read on?
The most disgusting, outrageous, and speechless heroine design I have ever read in Jinjiang! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A deadly dodder flower. He Tunan is one of the most miserable male protagonists in Jinjiang in 2023. He spent his life being sucked for blood. After reading this book, I feel disgusting that cannot be described in words [Cracked]
The ordinary and lackluster industrial sugar, the assembly line product can actually have this data, the King of Jinjiang is stunned [Spread your hands]
The feeling that I can't describe is that it is very, very, very ordinary. Of course, it is better than the kind of pretentious and illogical writing that can't be read after reading a few chapters. However, there is still a huge gap between good writing and good writing. It is completely readable or not, and will be forgotten the next day. I really can't imagine that the writing of Jinjiang's data is of this quality...
If it really doesn't work, let's not give up on Lujiang's readers and traffic. Let's go and write there. From beginning to end, the childhood settings ranging from vulgar to scummy are all written for the sake of popularity. Moreover, the length is huge, boring and tiring, and the writing is unclear. What I think is a stream of consciousness is actually It's all blatant. The author actually has the nerve to say that his CP is very exciting. Oh my god, I can't write good things and I haven't read good ones either. [It's changed] All the plots and plots are just forced. It's really boring. If I wasn't a bit obsessive-compulsive, I would have stopped reading it.
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