Sickly xp This is the coolest article I have read recently, I like it. There are not many career lines, but they are smooth and the logic should be smooth. For people like me who don't like a lot of machinations, it is a fairy tale. The writing style is also the same. There is no excessive rhetoric and no nonsense. The whole thing is very comfortable. But after reading it, I found that the author really likes to say "everything has its own dishes" hahahahaha. It's a very good article. I've been reading too many routine articles recently. When I first read Rebirth, I thought it was also a routine article, but when I saw it, it was also new and new. Many of the articles were high and low. I was pleasantly surprised by this one. I liked it.
The writing is very smooth, but it feels a bit emotionally monotonous. If this was a bedtime cookie with a small number of chapters, it would be okay, but it is still "thin" to hold up a book with more than 140 chapters. I came here based on the tweets, and the copy really struck a chord with my xp, who is weak but beautiful but strong. Maybe my expectations were too high? I felt that except for the final death escape, the front didn't hit my point very much. Every time it seemed to stop halfway through the rush (why not leave in front, because I still have hope for this article, maybe it will hit the back, but it was too far back??`) The beauty's weakness was not transformed into a refreshing point. It feels like the author's control over the group portraits is relatively weak, and there seems to be a lot of things you want to express but haven't. For example, with Commander Tai, you wanted to create a changeable person to show the complexity of human nature, but when you write it, it seems to be the author's own contradiction, and the character is not established. Everyone's opinions on Cen Chu are always easy to change, like modern netizens who have nothing to do with them. However, many of the decisions they make are related to the survival of the fleet, and there can be more intense conflicts. If this is written, the characters of the main and supporting characters can be enriched. Of course, if the author pursues "just throw your mind and watch", then I didn't say it. I think if the protagonist is not just sick for the sake of being sick, with such a good setting and the author's interstellar imagination, the writing can be richer.
I watched "Sleep at Dawn" first and then this one. I feel that it would be more reasonable if the plot of "Dawn" is directly connected. This one is purely based on the two-way arrow, but if it is weak, there will be no content. I have never seen such a loyal person before. It is a new experience. Those who don't like seeing naughty characters can leave. I hope there will be more good articles and I will continue to support you.
Those who like the sick can check it out, it's a good way to pass the time. It's just Gong's name that I really can't stand. There's a guy named Wang Pengfei and a bunch of other Pengfei next to me.