The writing style is not calm enough, the emotions are not delicate and flowing, and I always feel that the progress is too fast. Not suitable for me now.
It seems that the heroine is in a high position in the relationship. Through women, they control the dominant position through "love". Leaving aside the illusory thing of love, women are in a low position. The silly and sweet little heroine was tricked and tricked by the prince in the early stage, and she was coaxed into "devoting herself", because it was not a "dedication" that came from a woman's will to enjoy happily, and the sense of compulsion followed her, which was frustrating to watch. When the heroine fell out of favor with her adopted brother, she still couldn't resist the crying scene on his bed and forced him to have sex. Although it is written that the adopted brother is crying in grief, can a man rape a woman if he cries? No matter how much the heroine enjoyed it before her foster brother fell off the horse, the heroine was obviously not willing to do it here. However, when the foster brother restrained the heroine's legs and forced him on the heroine regardless of her wishes, it was "forcing a woman to do it". In the comment area, in addition to some normal people expressing their grievances, there are also a group of yellow-minded people who cannot see the actual situation of women at all. They kept posting "[][]" when they saw being fucked by a "strong woman", which made me even more aggrieved. Therefore the article was abandoned.
(But the female Bai Yuning written in the novel has her own goals and ambitions. The description of some female characters is okay. But the emotional plot is not in line with my preference)
In the middle and later stages, men and women look better when they seduce each other. He is good at using "scent" to describe the changes in the male protagonist's mood. The description of expressions and movements is delicate, and just a few sentences can make people think about it. There is no bed/drama in the whole text, only foreplay, but the foreplay is written in a very exciting way. With some simple daily actions, people can feel the affection of "secret love". I really like this description.
Content excerpts:
"At this moment, the cold and handsome young man raised his head, with only lust on his face, his eyebrows slightly twisted, his eyes hazy, looking at the figure of the person on his body, and whispered her name: "Cheng Liu..." There was a slight breath and tremor that could not be hidden in his voice.
At this moment, he was extremely happy. "
"Ji Chaozhou was still wearing a white shirt, but all the buttons had been unbuttoned. His chin rested on Cheng Liu's shoulder, his Adam's apple moved, and his long eyelashes drooped. Even though his expression was cold, the ends of his eyes were red with lust, like peach petals in March, and his eyes were filled with deep-hidden possessiveness. No matter how many times, he greedily enjoyed the moment when their skins touched each other, and wanted time to stay forever."
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