Advantages: The character design is full enough, the rhythm of the writing is very good, the language is fluent and readable, the setting took a lot of effort, the single-arrow multi-action is very enjoyable, and overall it is a very thoughtful book
Disadvantages: I don't like some of the mud attack descriptions, and the two different timelines are a bit confusing and not well explained.
It overly confuses the interests of the protagonist and those seven aunts and eight aunts. The readers are not happy at all. They don't know how much money Shou earns and what status and benefits he gets. At least one third of the story about raising a family to farm cannot be read at all. It also weakens the description of Shou and has no memory points. It is even more difficult to remember the names and identities of a lot of relatives. Many typos and omissions also affect reading.
A very mature and enjoyable novel about infrastructure and superpowers. The world view is grand and logical, the setting is wonderful, the values and exciting points are in line with the reader's orientation, and the rhythm is very good.
For example, the author's highest level could reach 80 points, but she only showed me 40 points in most chapters. It is obvious that she has a certain level and skill in key chapters and scene description, but most of the chapters completely ignore the reader's reading experience. The sentences are very fluent and the language is very uncomfortable, which seriously affects the perception of the article.
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