Although it is said to be a beauty gong, it is actually a collection of beauty gongs/girl gongs () I especially like long-haired beauties and only look at the master and the receiver. In addition, it is not considered clean or unclean.
The plot is very average, the characters are good but the portrayal is average, and the characters speak awkwardly. It doesn't feel like the beauty attack is well written. It's not the aggressive beauty attack I like to see. I wouldn't recommend reading it if it weren't for the very poor writing. (If you haven't ordered everything, you haven't ordered the extras)
The characterization is mediocre, that is, Gong and Shou always think each other is cute, but there is no cuteness in the writing. Then the same goes for possessiveness. Possessiveness means seeing the other person look at someone else one more time or something like that. All in all, the shape is quite flat.
The plot is also mediocre, with a lot of new settings inserted. I thought it was going to be a big twist, but it turned out that the plot never reached its peak and then ended.
When I was liked by my opponent, it was so sudden and inexplicable that I was so scared that I checked again and again.
The girl who blushes easily and makes a cry for sex is mature and gentle. The girl is very suitable for her! !
The relationship line is generally good, but when Shou is reborn, Gong's memories of his previous life become Gong's second personality in this life. The two personalities will quarrel over whether Shou is loved by himself in this life or the previous life. Shou has to be responsible for handling the two personalities, and they will eventually merge. I didn't like the personality of my previous life very much, and it didn't have a girly vibe. The overall plot is okay, it serves the love, and some conflicts are deliberately set up to promote the relationship.
The coquettish and beautiful apprentice Gong x is the cold and ruthless master Shou. In the early stage of Gong, he is a bad good guy and can win people's hearts in the later stage. Shou is stronger than Gong from the beginning to the end, controlling the overall situation and planning everything. There is a little bit of m1s0, no matter how I get hit, I don't fight back.
The starting point is heavy. After being reborn, he inherited the skills that can devour other people's cultivation + he has high understanding and can quickly learn other people's skills during a fight + he refines alchemy and sets up formations. He cultivates three cultivation methods. The weak defeats the strong/it's great when he is pretending to be a cross.
The emotional line is overall quite smooth and natural. The character design is quite right. But it doesn't have the flavor of beauty gong, it's a little girly gong. There's nothing too wrong with the plot. The extra chapter is like the main text. After reading the extra chapter, some misunderstandings were solved and they were really together. There is a beautiful fox man + other beauties in the article, and the sub-CP is a beautiful woman. Sometimes Gong is too impulsive + always clinging to Shou feels like a fq dog... Which is a bit irritating. Overall it's okay.
Disadvantages: The world view is average, basically the same as building a foundation, and there is no very detailed description. There are very few female characters, almost all of them are male, and the women who appear are very stereotyped. Shou has a lot of worries and refuses to listen to explanations. He doesn't talk to his disciples or people around him about many things. Sometimes he feels aggrieved because of the lack of information. When he doesn't open his mouth and gets angry, it can really make people mad. There are many people who refuse to listen regardless of whether they are good or bad, and I am really angry to death.
There are many guest appearances in the extra books, and the world view is expanded more, but the length is very short, resulting in incomplete and confusing. In the extra story, there is a story of having drunken sex with a girl to pass on the bloodline. This female character is just for having children and has nothing to do with it.
! In addition, there are many typos/semantic confusions!
The character design is in the copywriting, it's a girl named Gong! Very suitable girl attack!
The emotional line is sweet and quite good! The story is relatively short, so the relationship progresses relatively quickly. In the later stage, it's sometimes a bit uncomfortable not to have a long mouth, but it's all explained later! However, it can be seen that this lack of long mouth is mainly arranged for a change in feelings.
The rest is not a big problem, because the main focus is on the emotional line, so everything else is quite satisfactory and there are no major flaws.
There is not much to write about the group portraits, they mainly focus on attack and suffering. The plot is also quite satisfactory. I feel like some of the character plots are not developed due to the length of the story. It is mentioned in the next sentence, so there is generally no problem! Xianxia is mainly used as a background, without much development of the world view.
The girl who likes crying with red eyes is so cute! Quite right!
This book is so long ago that I forgot about it () Let's give it three stars for the time being.
It's quite common to play with fire and burn yourself (
In fact, this is not a beauty in the strict sense, but she has long hair and looks very handsome both in attack and after. In my impression, the plot description is very good and graphic, and the emotional lines are quite natural.
God among gods! God of images! Introduction to character types:
99% of the characters are well developed! (The remaining one can be said to be a plot promoter despite its flaws.) There is no villain in the strict sense, and the plot logic is very strict. This book is very satisfying, it really made me get it. I wanted to buy Osmanthus fragrans with wine, but in the end it was not the same as Young Traveler...
The relationship line is okay, but I don't know why they just naturally and naturally got together (?) It's destined (?)
I haven't ordered all of this book because there are locked chapters... I hate that I couldn't order it when I was reading it.
Xiang Shao Redefines Cuteness
17.3kFavorites22.8kClicks/ch8.8kNutrition
The Best Girl in the World [Rebirth] 25.4kFavorites62.4kClicks/ch11.2kNutrition
First Immortal Master
170.8kFavorites263.7kClicks/ch110.9kNutrition
Save the Second Male Lead 14.8kFavorites39.3kClicks/ch3.4kNutrition
Everyone Except Me Is Inhuman [Rebirth]
317.7kFavorites276.5kClicks/ch264.8kNutrition
Provoke 105.3kFavorites325.9kClicks/ch14.1kNutrition
Non-Romantic Relationship
20.6kFavorites30.6kClicks/ch5.6kNutrition
Are You Sick?
701.7kFavorites761.9kClicks/ch264.6kNutrition
The Villain Is Too Beautiful [Puishu] 360.3kFavorites479.3kClicks/ch151.9kNutrition