It's not good-looking. There is a male protagonist whose father provides weapons to the bad guys. It feels like massacre of a city for love [not specifically a massacre of a city, I just feel that way]
It doesn't look good and has a lot of bugs that I don't know what to say.
I abandoned the article in the middle, so I don't know if it will be changed later, and I don't want to know. I will just list here the highlights that I saw halfway through: ① The heroine's super power is refreshed at 0 o'clock every day. My first reaction was that it was a time lag bug, so I suggested changing it to refresh every 24 hours, or the world in the article is no longer so big, which can cause time differences. I don't know if it has been changed. Change ② to name the female supporting character Zhou Beibei and the male supporting character Lin Xiao. After being pointed out in the comment section, they argued that this was because the female supporting character had a cute name, cool behavior, and a very cute contrast. In addition, the author had something to say in the comment area, saying, "She has not changed so much in this world where they are despised." Why couldn't it be interesting to name the male supporting character Zhou Beibei and the female supporting character Lin Xiao? ③ The official forces the heroine to enroll in school, but it is obvious that not all "players" have a close relationship with the official. The official does not have a systematic strategy, and private intelligence collection > official (it can be seen from this that the world is not so small that there is no time difference)
I have only watched half of it, and I have watched it before. The above remarks only represent my personal opinions. In one sentence, it means: it is not to the point where I hate it the most, but I do "can't bear to read" (I know this is not the meaning of the word, but that's how I want to use it). :)
I just want to say one thing, who taught you to write all the young detective team (except Ke Ai) to death, but Miyano Shiho ended up living a peaceful life with his sister. Who taught you to write like this? I want--
Goddess of dice, please add some luck to me!
When I was following the article, I read it chapter by chapter. When I read it again and again, I felt that some places were quite OOC.
Amuro, through Yu OOC, guides the way in Chapter 16. Because the manager told rumors about the heroine and the police, she acted bravely. Do you still remember that you are an undercover now? Or in addition to Toru Amuro losing his classmates, does the author also remember the "greater sacrifice" in the darkness of his life?
Chapter 113: The heroine insists on being in the room even though she knows that there is someone in the closet [and it is the hero's brother]... OK, not only your brother, I am also a member of your play [Joker]
The previous writings are all good, but when it comes to writing that the system is Kurosawa's younger brother, it's a bit of a continuation. In other words, the world view setting is very interesting, but the author has not thought about how to round out Kurosawa's special status in the organization.
I don't like it. It's actually just a romance written in the shell of the Internet King. If it was just a romance, maybe I would rate it a little higher. But the heroine is an athlete in the beginning, and then she has to go through a tough waist, which makes her unable to continue playing, and she experiences bad things, which makes her indifferent to the opposite sex [actually destroying the heroine's cyber virginity], and she has to fall in love with a variety show in this situation. OK, OK, I can't understand the author's brain...
If there was no emotional drama, it would be a good novel. But if there is emotional drama, it would be 1 star.
In short, I personally think that duck is not necessary for the emotional scenes here.
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