In the past two years, the writing style is average or I don't like the style of writing (comments will be added after the unfinished writing), more strict, I like logical and online writing or more grasping.
It's an improvement compared to the author's previous book. Although it gave me the feeling of reading an old novel from ten years ago. All the plots are old plots, such as taking orders in times of crisis, not liking to sing but the band is short of people, the hero trying to conquer himself, kissing the wrong person and getting in the wrong car, etc. The writing is indeed not good enough to make the old plots interesting, but it can still be read.
I have the same problem as the previous book, that is, the front line is too long, but this one is not as well handled as the previous one. The previous one was bland, and this one is boring. The teammates and the company are very annoyed. It has been laid out for too long, and the contract has not been terminated. Moreover, I feel that there is something behind it, and I can't catch it.
It's better than the previous one. At least the plot of this one is smooth. There's no improvement in the writing. I'd say it's like Poison Wei, but the things I do are not quite the same. The career is going smoothly. It's a Goldfinger story, but the heroine herself doesn't feel her charm. It's a bit boring.
This article follows a more catchy style. Unfortunately, because it is an early article, many celebrities that the author has a good impression of or like have had accidents. The female protagonist talks a lot. In the end, the male protagonist chases his wife in the crematorium. If you like to hate Hai Qingtian, you can read it.
The novels written by this author are all very formulaic. The male protagonist says that anyone can do it. Dragons don't have the flavor of dragons. The stories are just like boss stories, and the writing style is not good enough for people to read. If you like to read nonsense stories, you can read it.
This one is a little better than the previous one, but that's it, the emotional line is inexplicable, the forum is purely sugar-coated, the taste of artificial saccharin is very strong, and the role-playing is a bit interesting.
The dragon in this book is very flavorful. The dark green tea is controlling and yandere. He suffers from the loss of his sister. What follows is a stronger possessiveness and desire for control. It is very good. The heroine's teammates are also written in a three-dimensional way. In comparison, the plot will be weaker, the emotional pull will be repeated, and it has been discontinued. If it can be completed, the score will be higher.
It's hard to comment on this article. The writing is good, but I got Wu Shixun in the dragon section. The heroine is not so much in love with the dragon, but rather that she must be with the dragon during the mission. The first love with Wu Shixun is more touching than the emotional line with the dragon.
The author's writing style is fluent and the plot is okay. In the story about a scumbag chasing his wife in the crematorium, the author's car is quite wild, but the dragon's portrayal is very unattractive, not to mention that he has one foot in two boats. In the later stage, he is in love to death. The charm of the heroine seems to be non-existent, and the hero can be bad, but he cannot be without charm. The main text is not as interesting as the introduction at the beginning.
The heroine is reborn with Lingquan, and met them when BB first debuted. The writing is actually okay, and the plot is not bad, but the reason why the hero and heroine broke up is also outrageous. The hero is a bit of a scumbag. He loves the heroine and talks to others, and later pursues his wife in the crematorium. Although it is short and drives a lot of cars, the character of the dragon is very average.
I feel exhausted [cracked] when clearing mines. The rhythm is not good, the emotion is not good, the behavioral logic is not good, and the plot is not good either.
If there is a seemingly non-existent writing style, an outdated and outrageous plot, a female protagonist who disguises herself as a man, an inexplicable male protagonist, and a sparse character design, I highly recommend it not.
The author's previous quick-throwing novel is a little better than this one. This one is long and will appear to be very streamlined. The previous one was a childhood sweetheart, so the emotions will be more natural. This one is a bit strange, and the creation of the dragon is also strange.
The writing style of this article is qualified, but the readability is not high. Regarding the album, the purpose of the company and the idol are not the same. The company is to make money, and the idol is to better showcase the album. A series of activities promoted by the heroine are basically not possible in Xiao Han, and there is a feeling that it became popular out of nowhere. The author's original background will be much better than writing a fan.
This book has a love line that is not well written, and a career line that is not well written. She really cares about her fans and her career, and will not fall in love before she reaches the top. The heroine is not a producer, and she does not need to fall in love for inspiration. The character design is very strange. The heroine relies on beauty to counterattack. It is a brainless and cool book. The love line is about men chasing women, but not much.
It should be the author's first novel. There is an age difference between the heroine and Long. The heroine is born after 2000, traveled through time, and learned composition and lyrics from Long. Dragon's feelings are inexplicable, and her firmness is strange. The heroine's personal charm is not written at all. She can only feel that she is a very soft person, and it seems that the love between the two people cannot be matched at all. The career line is also very average. The same problem is that the heroine is not attractive, so overall I can't get the author's humor from it.
The heroine of the unit story is Zhou Youlin. The heroine and Yong are childhood sweethearts. The heroine turned solo and turned into a producer. Her first love was Park Jae-bum, and later she fell in love with Eun Ji-won. Yong had a crush on her throughout the whole process, and she secretly poked and sabotaged it. The writing was good, and the plot was okay, but the climax and the forum writing were very average, and the ending was a bit sloppy, which didn't really poke me.
It's rare that they are together from the beginning, with no twists and turns in their relationship, and their career line is that idols turn into singers and then actors. But in fact, the dividing line between singers and idols is very different in Korea. The heroine's transformation is too easy, which makes it difficult for people to understand the suffering she suffered before. The transformation through variety shows is also very unconvincing and too bland.
The author's book and the leader's book both follow the flow of emotions. Those who like to talk about love without using their brains will probably find it quite delicious. Both of them are quite routine books. They just put some tricks in it, so you can just eat them casually.
The whole thing is very confusing. The relationship line is not so much dragged out as it is not talking about people. It is clear that the two of them know each other well, but they don't say it. They are jealous back and forth. The career line is also very confusing. An actor who was born in a variety show didn't take many acting classes. He usually fell in love. As a result, he won awards along the way and then switched to a career as a producer. There was no process at all and it was very messy.
It's a very overbearing article. You can't tell that the dragon is a dragon. It's a template-based article. The writing style is not good, and the understanding of Korean entertainment is not good either.
There are so many things I want to write about, but the presentation effect is too poor. The tug-and-pull before pregnancy was very interesting, but after pregnancy, when it comes to the life of a wealthy family, it is too messy and boring.
The author wanted to write about the heroine many times, but never wrote it. The heroine really lacks love, but the emotional line is very suspended, and every paragraph is difficult to comment on. The forums are actually looking forward to tearing it up, but they are just scratching the surface, the writing is very sloppy, and the career line is also very strange. I don't know much about Korean entertainment before I started writing, but the writing is not bad and I can read it.
As time goes by, the author dated an ex in order for the heroine to fall in love, but the problem is that the author's writing is too sloppy. I don't know how it started but it ended just to make Long jealous. The character of the heroine is also very inconsistent. I was confused by Dahei's brother-sister relationship. It was very long but I felt that nothing was in place.
The hero and heroine are childhood sweethearts, and the heroine is an actress. She has a huge golden finger, but nothing is really written well. The actress is simple to hold, and the emotions are strange. It is said to be push and pull. I only see the superior manipulating the inferior one. Love is strange, and the conversation is also strange.
Tai is really a good baby, and the mistakes in his past life are also regrettable. The dragon in this article is my favorite type. He is a paranoid yandere, controlling, and can't let go. He hates you for giving up on me and no longer wants me. I can give full marks just based on the emotional line. However, the plot has too many overlapping settings, time travel, soul absorption, and the witch's mess. It is really tiring to read. If you only look at the emotions, it is worth watching.
It's hard to say what I felt after reading this article. It ranged from average to good to bad. The early and middle stages of the article are good to read. The love-brained dragon and the science and engineering heroine. When the dragon is secretly in love, the pulling plot is good. You can feel the feelings of the two people even if you shed tears occasionally. Love, but I cried too much [cracked], crying after two or three pictures. After the heroine realized the feelings of the hero, she chose to hang on to the hero. I can't understand it. Long is not a very sexy person. On the contrary, he is very proud. He confessed twice and rejected twice. He is trying. Afterwards, I feel that no matter how much I like it, I will return to the boundary of friends. It is very unreliable for the author to use fans to represent Long. There are many attributes of fans, and not many fans have this feeling of sadomasochism. Moreover, when Long was an idol, the feedback he gave to his fans was very high, and it was a two-way relationship. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is not like this. The female protagonist does not understand emotions. When she cannot give love to the other party, she constantly gives the other party affection and caring contact. I think it is not handled well.
The female chef came to South Korea from China to open a store. Long didn't appear much in the early stage, and only began to have emotional scenes in the middle and late stages. Because Meibao opened a company for good friends, she signed 17 and 21, and there were also many second, third, and fourth generation artists, and it was a bland, healing daily life.
The scene where the heroine is an alien and communicates with a dragon in the void is quite interesting, but the rest of the story is actually quite boring. The heroine's character design as a big eater is quite outrageous. There are too many storylines about teammates and the details are not appropriate, so it is barely watchable.
It's quite a story. The heroine's brother and the dragon are close friends. The heroine debuted solo. Due to update issues, her career and relationship lines are quite suspended. There is a feeling that what should be done is what happened.
The author's writing style is basically the same as the previous book, but the love book uses its strengths and avoids weaknesses and focuses more on writing emotional lines. Therefore, although there are some problems with the main plot, the length is very short and can be ignored. This book cannot. This book is a story of reunion, where the woman dies and is reborn in the next life, the older one becomes younger, and the two people meet and fall in love again. The author wants to write too much, but the writing is not strong enough. Neptune is not mentioned yet, and the plot is a bit delayed. The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are also very clichéd, without new ideas, and a bit boring.
The heroine returned to domestic entertainment after her solo debut, because the daughter in a parallel time and space reunited with her ex-boyfriend. The emotional writing was OK, but the writing was not good, the plot line was a bit long, and the back and forth of irrelevant things would seem a bit watery and very bland.
The heroine turned into a cat, and it followed a healing and joyful writing style, but it was too brainless. It was too idealistic to have no objection to falling in love. It would be better not to let this plot go.
Comparing an article by Mary Sue, the heroine is already a movie queen at the beginning. The hero and heroine broke up together around the same time, and then met at a party. However, when she met her ex-boyfriend at the party and asked why they broke up, the heroine responded in a long paragraph in front of everyone. The whole thing was very embarrassing. I can't quite understand the fact that a celebrity exposes her privacy among a lot of people she just met. Aren't she afraid of being exposed by them or the paparazzi? The logical support is not very good, and the wording is a bit strange.