I like the subject matter very much, but I am very disappointed. I only read the Conan chapter. A large number of readers are stuck at a subscription rate of more than 10%, which is almost the end of the more than 70 Conan chapters.
Let's not talk about Gin's OOC. It's still acceptable for the time being. Kidd is a completely different person. "Hearing the cheers of fans who didn't take him seriously, Kidd's eyes were filled with contempt." "He glanced contemptuously at his childhood sweetheart's father." He is a phantom thief, not a gangster. I suspect that the author has not checked the information at all.
And the protagonist, do you want to write a clear and stupid college student? Ordinary college students are not so shameless. Thank you. Kidd took the blame for the gems he stole and gave them to the FBI (I don't even know what the FBI wants the gems for). It's so uncomfortable. I won't read the Conan chapter until it's changed. The Conan chapter is almost over and I'm taking such a big step.
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