It's good, but I don't really like the protagonist party, and Ron's reaction to Hermione and Krum being together is not written, and the reactions of everyone are not very descriptive, which is a bit unable to achieve the effect I want. . .
Not bad, not bad. It's the kind of literature about immoral orthopedic siblings that I like. The description of Liddell and the heroine's tug-of-war is great. I love it.
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