Includes some subjectively unsightly books, including but not limited to: the smell of ancient dog-blood bg, the writing style is abstract, the logic is incomprehensible, there are many males and ex, etc.
It's the most fantasy-like, and the protagonist is suspected to be someone who has been tricked by the author and readers. I can't say. It's a typical Long Aotian (dragon is not a male-only word in my case) novels, with adventure encounters and "beauties". If you like to be a substitute, just read it. Unfortunately, I'm just a CP person. I just want to watch the story between the protagonists and don't want to be a substitute myself.
The biggest flaw is that the author deliberately creates interactions between the protagonists. The first point: A is a tiger and B is injured. It is known that the author wrote that B's clothes were difficult to break with his claws. Then A turned around and used the tiger's claws to strip B naked. I would like to ask, but also write B's reaction after being scratched. [Loading] The second point is that it is known that after B woke up, he picked up A and threw it away, which can be inferred from B's hand. It worked, but before the day was over, B turned around and ordered A to feed her with her own hands and with chopsticks. May I ask? [Loading] Isn't this a tiger? Can't your hands move? And why do you still need to eat after being a master of cultivation? The boss who is hungry and can't eat four meals a day, the author, do you really know this deliberately?
The second flaw is that the author made B really look like a feudal woman. A looked at B's body, so B is a little shy. May I ask? [Loading] Isn't A still a tiger?
If you really like to take on the role of the protagonist and reach the pinnacle of life, and marry Bai Fumei, you are really rich. Just watch it, it's from Final Fantasy.
Drive high and go low, the front is fine. When I saw the abandoned part of the aquarium, I didn't quite understand why the plot was about a female customer creating the protagonist Huang Yao. Moreover, this customer was the one who tried to dispel rumors to save the protagonist's friend. I really didn't understand it. There was also a scene where the protagonist's high school best friend came to her store to commit fraud. I also didn't understand it. Women were written in such a vicious direction for no reason?
The most important point is that I understand that the author wants to write that the protagonist has a weak character and is not good at dealing with interpersonal relationships, but why are you slandering women? Moreover, she has not grown through these things. It was all solved by her dear almighty baby wolf (derogatory) [Joker]. She just realized that her character is really that weak. May I ask? Maybe it's because my taste is so picky that I can't stand it, but in other people's eyes it should be fine...
(If you want to write that the protagonist grows up and is not weak, then write that she is like a licking dog in front of the other protagonist? [Joker] dare not get angry and dare not express his true thoughts, okay, the weak me in the past is dead, and now I am even weaker.
The mid-opening and low-moving, I feel that the author has not grasped the rhythm well, and the logic and character design are not very good. Chapter 73 has many long comments and complaints that you can read if you are interested.
The thing that I hate the most is that the protagonist A always treats the protagonist B as a weak little white flower. As soon as they are alone, the protagonist A turns into a big sai fan and starts to care about the protagonist B. He also does not take B with him when looking for supplies. He thinks she is too weak and is afraid of getting hurt. Obviously A has seen B shoot before, and I also know that B is a person who has lived for four years in the apocalypse. Generally speaking, B does not have a strong sense of existence.
Those who like flat-chested jokes are in luck. In just five chapters, the "joke" about flat-chests appears no less than five times. I don't understand why men in a patriarchal society repeatedly emphasize the sexualization requirements of women in a patriarchal society, and feel that it is a shame to fail to meet such requirements. I missed it.
It was a good thing at the beginning, but I didn't get ex-bad. Who taught you to use a male perspective to describe women in GL articles? It seems that you were poisoned by male-video novels in the early days. The following is excerpted from pages one and two of the original book:
"A body with curves and convexities... Just one look at it will make your blood boil"... A voice that makes your whole body tingle, and a hint of coquettishness..." These are all based on the psychological activities of a male driver to describe the protagonist. I missed it.
Blessed are those who like Kedeng literature. It's only after I lost it that I realized that I like her but she has been polished. The main reason is that the writing is not good-looking. After all, if the writing is good, any character and plot can be captivated.
I'm not kidding, you're in luck if you like ancient stories about physical abuse and physical abuse. Abuse is just for the sake of abuse. An NPC appears out of nowhere to save the protagonist. A supporting character appears out of nowhere to steal the protagonist's things. There is also a description of a male creature in heat that disgusts me. I won't explain it here. The two protagonists in the later stage are completely OOC and can't be watched.
I just want to watch the second world. I bought a few chapters and it made me sick. Those who like to read about men and spiritual men in GL stories are blessed. I hugged and hugged me and I still fell asleep, yue
Typical descriptions that are incomprehensible, with many unnecessary attributions and descriptions of appearance, environment, etc., And the emotional progression is also very inexplicable. This is what I think is a typical example of telling stories in abstract expressions.
I tried to persuade him to quit at the beginning because I didn't know the significance of describing the blue-haired man and the detailed description of the stinking male creditor's debt collection plot.
Although it is a GL novel, the protagonists in the book are not bg, but one of the protagonists is like an accessory. Every time I describe her, she is jealous, angry, or in love, not independent, and seems to have no self-personality, but the paragraphs and comments are quite funny.
I quit after reading less than 10 chapters. I know how to write novels in 19 years, but I was deceived by the completion score and the number of people. The most popular novels at that time were to unfold the story in BG novels, so there were a lot of men, and it was necessary to describe their psychological activities and promote the plot of the story. I looked through and there are classic XSR plots that rely on XSR plots to make heroes more beautiful, which is also not good.
It is also a very classic type of article that looks high-end and is packaged with abstract descriptions. I think describing a character starts with the small details in her life or her actions, rather than abstract descriptions such as "thinking of XX, she smiled with joy" (for example)
Typical abstract descriptive writing hanging in the air. Generally, this kind of comment section only has mine comments but little impression after reading it. Articles with high completion scores and a large number of people who rate them will understand themselves.
Needless to say, it was originally quite good without a male character, but then the story was changed to include a fiancé, and it also had to have a plot similar to that of a novel, and there were too many descriptions of men at the beginning, so I didn't really like it.
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