There are more descriptions of appearance and more descriptions of emotions. In the early stage, there are mainly emotional descriptions of three competing for one. There are many, many.
Nothing to say, it's a good article. I read the author's other article in the comment section and found that he didn't say much about martial arts, but the author is very skilled at fighting scenes and skipped most of the fighting parts. The writing style is very thoughtful and restorative. I enjoyed reading it. I hope there will be a sequel.
The emotional descriptions are really delicate and powerful! Especially the process of becoming the baby mother of the whole family in the early stage is really amazing!
It was great. The most impressive thing was when I modified the settings for the first time. The feeling of despair came over me! The rest of the story was also very coherent, but I thought it would be a highlight in the fourth battle, but I didn't expect it to be a stepping stone like Itachi. After that, the plot was a little dull, maybe because it was different from what I expected. The ending of the main text is a bit sad, but also very good.