It was so tortured to watch, both sweet and smelly, but the proportion of bad smells was too great. The emotional line was written like a history. By the end, I didn't feel that the two of them had any direct feelings. The transformation of Gong's character was stiff and the character creation was flat. I felt that these two people were not suitable for being together. This emotional line was really written without any need. Yes; the first thirty or forty chapters of the plot line are all about solving the problem of relatives and enemies with high blood pressure, which is very uncomfortable to watch. In the middle period, when the sugar factory is developing, the writing is okay, but in the later period, it is a bit boring. The highlight of the whole story is only the period when the sugar factory is developing. The villain in the middle and later period is written like a retard.
I really wanted to read this story, so I endured it and read it, but most of the book was boring about the key, a basic plot about mentally retarded plots in kindergarten, and half of the whole book is for children. I don't like children, so I really read it through the first part.
Cookies, a special offering, I feel like the author has already made it fun, and the characters are well established, although it can be said that there is basically no plot.
Ugly. After reading a few chapters, I just felt suffocated. A modern family of children is happily sent to ancient times to be imprisoned. I can't think of any reason for him to travel to ancient times except to have a crazy wife. Then I ask you, why do people travel to ancient times to be despised even if they don't have enough food or clothing?
The free chapter has no splash at all, the characters are floating, and there is no introduction to the world background at all. After reading a few chapters, I don't know what I'm reading. It's all repetitive and boring.
In the early stage, the character design was unstable and the shaping was average. Although some of it was considered foreshadowing, the shaping was really not good. It started to look good in the middle period, but the rhythm in the later period was not good. There was always a problem of vague subjects in the whole text. All the men were referred to as men. I often looked at it and didn't know who was talking.
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