Full order, obvious taste (sweet enough, Su 1 silly 1 cold 1 dog 0 handsome and beautiful 0, reality/abo/immortal/zerg), the story theme is complicated, you can decide it by yourself
Straight man's brain circuit attack and secret crush
The text is finished, it's not bad to read in one go
The plot and emotional lines are good, but the psychological and behavioral descriptions could be richer and the characters would be more three-dimensional.
I read old articles because I like the author's serials (the one "Passed Through")
There are good places, but it's not that great. I feel like my writing power is lacking.
The serials I write now are better looking
But the character design is great, green eyes and red hair are also great, right?
The main CP is Brother Gou, which is very interesting
The reason for the word count of the sub-cp side story is that the logic is strict enough, but it's delicious.
The chased husband is in the crematorium. He likes to be raped and raped in the early stage and then used as a licking dog in the later stage. In the middle, he is really tortured.
The plot is very funny, and the emotional line is beautifully written. There are children in the extra story, but the sense of love is very strong. It's beautiful.
Dog training literature is good-looking, realistic, and refreshing. Some of the plots are romantic enough, and I also like flirting with each other in the early stages. Later, he was chased by his husband and kept training dogs.
The psychological description is a bit lacking, and the visuals are a bit too much.