Lightning Protection (PS: Some people have no desire to read further after seeing the introduction, but if the plot is really exciting, I hope you can comment). Those who have not seen it will get 3 points.
Seeing the scene where the heroine was observed by Hawking and then contacted by the hacked computer, emm..., Are you not defensive at all? Answer whatever you ask
The indecisive male protagonist can already imagine what will happen next (the emperor and empress are at peace with each other, but the aristocratic family will not give up on sending noble girls into the palace. The harem still uses eunuchs from the previous dynasty, which means that the family's connections are still there. It is not easy for the emperor who has just ascended the throne to make small moves to be discovered. Send more girls to the palace. People, if you make a few more misunderstandings and misunderstandings, you can only be a thief for a thousand days, but you can't guard against a thief for a thousand days. As long as the emperor gets drunk once and succeeds once, no matter whether it is true or not, there will be a gap, or the misunderstanding will cause the emperor to be forced to accept the concubine under pressure... Then in the end, we will either be complete strangers or treat each other as guests)
The male protagonist was not a world-famous or moderately successful writer in his original world, so why did he become so famous once he arrived in the interstellar world? There is no transition, just mention that mental power has become S+
It's quite novel at the beginning, but it gets a bit boring later on. The foreshadowing is too long. The sixty-odd chapters have not yet written about how the protagonist uses his own system to save the Qing Dynasty. I don't want to read anymore.
He's so arrogant that he's not my type. The bugs in the article love the queen of the bugs, and they will love anyone who travels through time/becomes the queen of the bugs. In the play, the protagonist does not love the heroine's soul but the identity of the Zerg Queen. It is even a love engraved in the genes rather than a psychological love.
I am struggling with love all day long. The training content is very shallow and my writing is not strong enough. I can't stand it even before I see v.
The author is not well educated and has a lot of common sense mistakes. I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 10. In the Qin Dynasty, lard was used casually, as well as chili peppers and dogwood. The clerk was the mayor and could automatically learn Xiaozhuan. Ginseng can cure all kinds of diseases...
Many of the settings are imperfect and cannot be self-circulating. The writing is not very good, and some places look like a running account. Many of them are in narrative style, and the description of the process is too wordy.
It's not good-looking, it's a lightning-proof story, the plot is magically changed, there are a lot of surprises, there are a lot of contradictions, and the writing is no good