There is nothing beneficial about pure black mud! There are original spin-offs, run away with a glass heart, I won't be held responsible if I complain to your heart!
I don't understand. The upper attack is a complete hexagon. The support is growing rapidly but it is not as good as the attack. So why do almost everyone attach the most importance to the strategic arrangement of the support and just say "all-powerful and old" to the attack? In his previous life, Gong had become the symbol of the golden generation in basketball, and after his rebirth, Gong himself stayed by Shou's side. As a result, Gong's old teammates and coaches all shed tears at Shou, saying that they saw the shadow of Gong in his previous life in Shou. What new type of NTR are you working on?
Also, less than ten chapters into this article, the two of them are having an affair. They look at each other, move hands and feet, talk about getting married, and talk about marriage for a lifetime. They talk about it for dozens of chapters. While the heart is beating wildly at the same time, the window paper is still tight. Is it really unbearable that all the teammates and opponents have become a part of each other? Author, you don't think this is called an ambiguous period, right? Whose family has such a long period of ambiguity? I don't think it's very tasty, I just think the industrial saccharin is choking.
If you want to write about business war, you should write about business war well. Don't inexplicably turn to "everyone wants to have sex".
If you want to write about competition, you should write about competition well. The gold finger is so big that it completely covers the effort of the offense itself. What's more, it seems that competition has completely become a part of this pair of b-people Prey. Uh-huh.
If you want to write an emotional drama, can you also write an emotional drama well? It seems that Shou is just playing with emotions, and Gong is so jealous that he just treats everyone around him as a light bulb.
If you want to write a doi, you should improve your driving skills. Thank you. Jinjiang's stream of consciousness?? I have seen it a lot, and each one makes people think and have endless aftertaste. Since you have chosen such a high frequency of activities in bed and on the bed, what does it mean to only have a running account and car exhaust?
The old-fashioned system text game wears it, and the plot has long been forgotten. I only remember that the reason for running away was because the heroine actually called her own image "Master Controller". You're in Jinjiang, so you're not an otome traveler. Is that right? Perhaps in the beginning, master was a neutral term, but now you don't use the protagonist or even "I", but use the title master, saying that you don't mean any harm. Who would believe it? It's better to v me 50 and believe that I am Qin Shihuang
I didn't know much about football when I first read this article. At that time, I just felt that the sequel to the main article was a bit sad. I've been re-reading it for the past two days, and when I read this article, I completely realized why everyone in the comment section was scolding the author. With only one year left on his contract, he was sold to Bayern Munich as Neuer's substitute. After Neuer recovered from injury, he was loaned to Inter Milan, which was equivalent to directly killing his historical evaluation and his dignity as a top player. No one will remember him when selecting the best team in history in the future, because in his peak period, he was not as seriously injured as Neuer, who was nearly 40 years ago. The comment section only talked about Cha In's position and did not talk about the protagonist's own attitude at all, but it is not the 18th century when there was no triangular trade. The player signed a contract with the club, not a contract of sale. If he did not agree to transfer to Bayern, the deal would not be negotiated. Can the car still tie him up and get on the plane to Munich? Sister, you really hate the protagonist in your novel.
When I clicked on this rich and sour novel, I was reviewing another book, Xiaochang. The settings of the two attacks were somewhat similar, so I couldn't help but run away after reading more than ten chapters of this book. The whole logic collapsed and the rhetoric was piled up. As expected, there is no harm without comparison. I had never thought that this kind of thing could be so eye-catching before. . .
The second half took a sharp turn and was so weird. I worked in domestic entertainment for 4 years and then switched to Korean entertainment. I have been doing it for eight years. Regardless of whether it is domestic or Korean, the group members in this configuration are inexplicable. They add b-levels just to increase b-levels. Opera and idols are two completely different training systems. Just like Nakamura Kazuyo, who has been studying ballet for more than ten years, her entry into kpop is like a drop of water entering the ocean. In particular, the main character got the top spot in the college entrance examination just to increase the popularity of the group. The reporter asked him why he still entered the entertainment industry after getting the top score in the college entrance examination. He actually wanted to improve his value. I really, I was amazed. 12 Years of star chasing career is not enough for me to understand this thing.
Looking at the name, I thought it had something to do with superpowers, but I didn't expect it to be a serious criminal investigation.
I feel that the most successful part of this article is that the setting of ABO, who has congenital defects, is well implemented. What the second gender differentiation brings is not touching love in the first place, but naked class conflict. A has an innate advantage in society by virtue of his second gender, and thus takes the lead in completing capital accumulation and becoming capital itself, further monopolizing wealth and consolidating class. It's not as outrageous as cyberpunk. It's the asset-positive process and unspoken rules that we are familiar with in modern capital society. The rich do whatever it takes to increase the probability of A's differentiation, but in essence they are consolidating their class. To this end, they have launched surrogacy, in vivo experiments, and all the gray and black industries you can think of, which is reasonable and true. This is also why I gave it four stars. This is the first time I have seen an article that seriously explores the social contradictions of the ABO worldview.
In addition, this world view is too big, and the author's writing power is not enough for her to recycle all the characters and foreshadowings. The revelation of Laura's past was so trivial that it didn't have much effect. The same goes for Tang Youning's line. By the end of the story, he, a very important character, didn't show his face. . . Ber, then why did you give him this line and this identity?
The following part is more subjective. There is no need to listen to what I say.
It's really hard not to complain about attacking and receiving the emotional line. When I read later, I finally understood why the author deleted the label "love brain attack", because it was Shou who exchanged lives and destroyed his family. Shou swallowed the bitter tears of hatred, sacrificed everything for Gong's own life, and then left for North America. After Gong lost his memory, he completely forgot about Shou. In this case, it would be quite ridiculous to write that the attack is about love.
Then this feeling, my god, how could someone be so miserable? His father died miserably and his mother died unjustly, and the driving force behind fate has been using accidents to "correct" his life. I felt that he barely recovered for a day. New injuries piled up old ones. He was either lying in the hospital or on the way to the hospital. Every time something happened to Gong, he would use all his weight to save it, and then try his best to cover up the truth of the past, so as not to affect Gong's smooth life. To be honest, after reading it, I still don't understand why he loves it so much and still loves it to this extent, huh.
The author wanted to write about a heartthrob, a highly intelligent and beautiful person, but it was a complete failure. It's not a greasy cannon fodder every now and then, but every chapter has a former colleague/enemy of the enemy who covets Shou. Even though Shou is already in a high position and holds great power, almost no one listens to him seriously. Regardless of whether he is a friend or foe, they are all five-legged male dogs who have nothing else on their mind except the lower body. I don't think I'm very attractive. After all, it's hard to be attractive when you're surrounded by mosquitoes and flies. This group of greasy cannon fodder men will not make you a heartthrob. They will only make people feel stupid and abandon the article.
I couldn't stand it until halfway through and gave up. I really don't like the protagonist who is boring to death, very stubborn, and prone to internal friction. Just thinking about getting along with this kind of person makes me feel tired.
Whether it's the handling of cheats or the control of rhythm, 40 billion is far worse than doing whatever you want. The summer break hasn't even ended yet in Chapter 150, and the league championship is about to be won in Chapter 260. It's a very unbalanced structure. Moreover, it is a trap and the end is far away.
To be honest, I would rather the author write Tang Tang as the Red Devil version of Randall. It's so weird. The article from six years ago was able to do whatever it wanted. How could it achieve a full retreat of 40 billion?
It's been said that Japanese and American comics don't get along, so don't mix the two sets together again! ! I feel that as soon as I get involved with Japanese comics, all American comic characters will immediately become 2+ and lose their wits. Is this fair to say? (.)
This article,,, wow you asked me to say something good.
Butterfly Spirit, I beg you to give up Abo and the awkward relationship line, please, please stop fighting with these two, just use your strengths to write games and e-sports, I will definitely support you as the new god of e-sports!
The heroine has been running accounts and socializing for future auditions since she was in her early tenth year. She has a very thorough understanding of the hidden rules of the draft. In the end, she seems to have come in third place? It's not a Korean talent show, it's a domestic Rocket Candy kind of thing. Well, it's an idol group that exists in name only, and its formation is about to disband, and it's an NBCS idol group. After their debut, they have been tepidly hovering in the second and third tiers. It makes people feel that she has worked hard for so many years and is only a second or third tier? Is that all? To be honest, I think she will be successful in whatever she does in the future if she has this perseverance!
I read this article with a more cheerful attitude. God Takamama lined up to save America, the Blessed Land, and mingled with DC and Marvel superheroes. He didn't even look at Japan, where monsters and powers are also rampant. I just wanted to interview Neon Man about how he felt being treated like this hahahaha
The interstellar version of Three Lives Three Worlds is a bloody love story. I was tortured to pieces while watching it. It tasted extremely sour and refreshing. I would click on it every time I wanted to be tortured.
But I am a liberal arts student. Sometimes I can ignore the unreasonable plot settings for the emotional line, but I really can't stand the practice of sacrificing social systems for technological progress. Although interstellar literature is all about the history of space opera, but you have a federal or parliamentary system, even a constitutional monarchy, I think you have tried hard, but as a result, your Chinese feudal emperor system or even the Western European lord system can emerge, which is really difficult for me to deal with. . . Yes, this is the reason why I usually don't touch interstellar literature. When I see things like "Aristocratic Family" and "Emperor System" appearing in the interstellar background, I will really wither!
The Mr. And Mrs. Smith gag is actually not easy to write at all. It is often linked to comedy, so the story at the beginning is very important to set the tone. If the author makes readers think that concealment, sacrifice, and protection are all in service of comedy elements, then it's over, and the seriousness of the plot line will be eliminated at all. For example, Gong's black robe and waistcoat should have been very classy when he first appeared, but due to the tone set by the colorful bald man when he first met, it just gave me the feeling of "watching an acquaintance act".
In addition to attacking, the seriousness of the Guardian organization has not been established at all. I can feel that the author wants to rely on the responsibilities and style of the special CPC, but in one sentence, it can be summed up in a superficial way, and the clichés and expressions of determination are just superficial. It is almost like the fake big space strategy homework I wrote, which made me frown.
It's so amazing. This article is obviously my favorite mode of getting along with CP, but it's just boring to read.
When writing about the Republic of China, you only want to write about its ecstasy and the impact of old and new cultures, but regard its current turbulence and national salvation as a dispensable background; you write about the prosperity and new trends of the French Concession in Shanghai in 1919, but you do not write about the shame of the Paris Peace Conference. Ah, when it comes to this, I react with disapproval, and just change the May Fourth Movement to early June. The order is actually strike first and then school strike. Even the protagonists went on strike and closed business as if they were just following the trend. The background of the event was not mentioned at all. If you ask, it is just a historical fiction. Does this kind of Republic of China have any sense of persuasion and empathy? "Take the essence and discard the dross" is not what you were told to use, right?
It is precisely because the author has chosen to "contrary" to the characteristics of the Republic of China that the scene where the conflict arose over whether to go to Nanjing gave people such a bad impression. He wanted to continue serving as a soldier in Nanjing only to serve his country. To dissuade him, all he had to do was analyze why Nanjing could not allow him to realize his ideal. But Shou was like a gourd with half its mouth cut off, either using emotions to threaten her, or finding excuses that were frivolous. And it can be seen that he really doesn't agree with the idea of "serving the country by joining the army", and insists on letting Gong stay in Shanghai to do business safely, which makes people angry.
Jinjiang's score of 9.7 Is really too high. The author wanted to write about Su Shou, but the way of portraying him was to express the admiration and covetation of others about his stature and appearance - the most superficial and vain one. The real Su never lies in his appearance, but in his dazzling confidence in his own field and his fearlessness and lack of anger when everyone is in panic. Of course, the author can arrange many famous admirers for him, but please never reverse the cause and effect: it is because his personality charm is strong enough that many people will remember him, not because there are many cannon fodder who pursue him, so his Su can be reflected.
The emotional lines are also painted on the skin but not on the bones. I don't know why Shou was indifferent to Gong in the last chapter, but agreed to Gong's love request in the next chapter; I also don't know why Gong kept his personal servant to monitor Shou. Shou was in a girls' school, and if a girl asked him to borrow a book, the maid would write to Gong to tell him. Ah, but Shou himself is also a person who always likes to "joke" with Gong with cuckolds, and the author has not grasped the degree of it. Rather than flirting, it is more like Shou is deliberately teasing Gong. All in all, I felt very uncomfortable watching it.
Ps. Don't be stunned anymore. Are you tired of reading one chapter once?
This is the one that's a parody of "My Summer in Gotham" but done too hard.
The combination of style + first person + funny fangirl gave me a strong flavor of "I spent my summer in Gotham" from the first chapter. And whether it was the Bat Cub's Life Diary, which I threw away after reading five chapters, or this one, they both gave me a sense of deja vu - the Life Diary was too cute and cute, but the heroine in this one tried too hard to imitate Xiao Li's mischievous fun-loving person. It was obviously intended to give the heroine a cheerful and E-persona, but it only made me hallucinate about those people who failed subjects every day, were perfunctory at work, and relied on social networking to be elected as student union cadres. I couldn't like her at all.
The female character of Xiao Li's ashes fan is funny but not obtrusive. That's because the other bat cubs in that book are just as funny as Xiao Li, and they all have the same faces, so Xiao Li's various behaviors are not offensive, and the bad jokes will not make her inferior, it will only make me laugh non-stop. The heroine in this book obviously didn't grasp that level, and she made bad jokes regardless of the occasion.
The golden finger given by the author to the heroine is a group of relatives and friends. The heroine receives three-digit gifts from China during the New Year and festivals. On her birthday, more than 20 people send her blessings at zero points, but she has never seen her give anything to her friends, and she has no contact with them on weekdays. Only when she wants to grab a few points, she will think of friends, just like an Internet female star who has fans. Her best friend, the CEO, even filled in her name as the insurance beneficiary, but the writing almost never mentioned that the heroine had made any efforts to maintain friendships. She felt like she was just an unjust tool who helped her grab grain and paid her a lot of money. I really want to ask, Sister Ba, what do you like about the heroine?
The two-star rating is mainly out of my own selfishness. Those who come for HP can avoid this book, and those who come for mutants and Marvel may like it.
This article combines Marvel and HP, but the problem is that the combat power settings of these two worldviews are seriously unbalanced, and the author does not want to balance it at all. It not only makes Harry disgusted with the magical world, dilutes Harry's feelings for James and Lily, but also uses mutant settings to play a dimensionality reduction attack on the magical world. What can I, a seven-year old HP fan, say?
Moreover, the character names throughout this article are all in original English, and the Chinese-English translation of the main characters has to be reflected. For those characters whose Chinese translations have a big pronunciation difference with the original names/who have low popularity in the original work, it will be completely blind. This is one of the reasons why I personally gave up writing.
I found that I couldn't understand the thinking of the Joker or Jack at all. Even after analyzing them in large sections of dialogue, I still couldn't understand why the Joker created this personality and then fell in love with him, and why Jack fell in love with the Joker. Everything is in line with the concept of "clown", chaotic, disordered, and crazy. Because of this, I feel that each of the above issues is beyond the scope of normal thinking and understanding. I don't have such a thing as abnormal thinking. If I could understand the clown, I would dream about killing someone and spray "Why so serious" on the wall right now. So forget it, I really can't get anything it wants to express.
The universe has been restarted over and over so many times, but the protagonists of the world are always those few people. Jason is dead in this world, not dead in that world, Batman is crazy in this world, and the Joker has become the Joker in that world. The other ordinary people who abide by the rules of social order remain unchanged. They are always the numbers on the battle damage list, and NPCs soaked in fear gas to provide a tense atmosphere. To be honest, I find this difficult to comment on.
Ps. The first dungeon is linked to the undead of Baker Street. The mission introduction is really awesome - "If you want to become the most terrifying murderer in the history of your city, you have to find a way to make the glorious title of your predecessors shatter in front of everyone. Remember, the moment when a person in a civilized society commits his first murder is as historic as a monkey turning into a human being."
It was very tasteless, and I couldn't help but give up after halfway through. Records kept being broken and gold medals kept being won, but I didn't feel any satisfaction at all. It was just plain and simple.
Moreover, the author is very self-aware and does not use the label of a strong woman. After all, she can even write a plot where the heroine proactively hints to the male protagonist about doi the night before an international competition, and the male protagonist cares more about her competition the next day than she does. . .
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