2 Points cannot be more. It's not very interesting, it feels like a Mary Sue, but I also wanted to write it as a strong and hard-working heroine. The gold finger is very wide open, and there are some traces of imitation. Hey, maybe the quick travel stories at that time were all in this style. (But the author's academic level is very average. The latest article did not feel that the level has improved. It can probably be rated at about 2.6 Points.
Alas, people who read this book are very unhappy. It's very difficult to score a three-pointer, about 2.6. Before Mouse Jing, everyone was enjoying themselves, but after Mouse Jing, things fell into a disastrous state. It was a small climax when the four murderers were killed, but after that it was very ordinary. The ending was rushed and the last few chapters were weird. No, it's very strange to leave from Aluan. I have absolutely no idea why I wrote this. It's like deliberately emphasizing that Aluan also has his own thoughts? But I won't write about what will happen after she gets out of trouble. Liang Mancang had been thinking that he would be restless just waiting for his grandson to become emperor, so he didn't write anything. Grandma is in poor health, and there is no description for ten years? ? The title refers to the long-lived girl and the poor-luck girl. In the essay, he explained that he wanted to end it like this, but he had no idea what it was for. Do you want to compare the heroine with the illegitimate daughter of Princess Fengyi? Moreover, the description of the heroine is also very strange. I kept thinking that it was boring, but in the end, nothing interesting was arranged for the heroine. There is not much description of the growth of the heroine. One is written better than the other. It becomes harder and harder to look at the old one from the new one. (It shows that the author has grown very quickly)
What can I say, the setting is quite interesting. But two points is already too high to stand. I finished reading the first story in a curious state of mind. Oops, I don't understand what the author is trying to say. The heroine is silly and sweet for a while, and listens to whatever the system says. After a while, he became very shrewd. He was pretty good at pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. But the emotional scenes are so baffling that I fell in love with them. Finally, after the strategy was successful, his desire for control came to an end and he agreed with the heroine to leave the world, but then died inexplicably? ? It's confusing and not pretty.
