Our Main Attack Is Partial Attack, Attacking Su's Attack and Control
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"Su" = creating a full and arcing personality and charm, "Control" = focusing on plot & emotion. Likes to be chased, weak without a bed, mostly drama-oriented, beautiful attacks, including handsome attacks
I almost finished it, but Lan Xinjie is sad, cute, beautiful and handsome. We like you, little Blue Bones! The setting of the full text is very interesting, and it incorporates the back room and other backgrounds, but there are a few borrowed elements. Please decide whether to read it or not based on how interested you are. And because the character setting of Lan Xinjie is a real sheep's tail in the early stage, but as far as I can see, it seems that it has not been played weakly, so it is also selected for this book list. It will be added after systematic evaluation and analysis.
It's so beautiful that I want to cry. Why did the goddess just meet you now. . The writing and setting of the plot are all very good. The writing may seem mediocre at first glance, but the more it is written, the more concise and powerful it becomes. If you look closely at the plot logic, it does have flaws, but the flaws cannot be concealed. Xue Cuo has a very charming and charming personality. I can even say that every positive character in the article is well-shaped, with their own personality and charm, and everyone has their own way. At this point, although I am gsgk, I appreciate this article not only in this capacity. As a reader, I really sincerely hope that everyone can read this article. The brilliance of this article is not only limited to the writing skills itself, but also the shining meaning of the article. The broad "qi" contained in this article is the way of all races in the world. It may not be completely in-depth to the core, but it is good to have this concept. If you can match your own values and concepts like me, you will enjoy reading it. I recommend it.
There are three evaluation angles: setting, plot, and writing (accounting for 4/3/3)
[Setting] Lure people into killing them.
It has a beautiful, strong but miserable protagonist, and is full of buffs. It stands to reason that no matter how you write it, it won't be ugly. However, the hidden setting is that after amnesia, she completely turns into a mentally retarded and soft little white flower. Silly Baitian is led by the boss, pampered and coaxed away, and everyone is seriously OOC. The cp acts as a pendant and shield. The author is actually writing about father and son secretly, and the writing is very unpleasant...
They have become a domineering group. Heartbreaking, I actually like father and son.
[Plot] It's completely high and low. I really want to ask the author if he knows what he is writing next? This point overlaps with the above, so I won't go into details. The general summary is that the characters of the former and the former are completely different, and the plot is also very brainless. There is no so-called drama, it is all about untenable emotional lines. It is so confusing... I like to buy the whole book, but this one made me make an exception and skipped buying it from the middle to the end, and finally gave up completely.
[Writing] The narrative is at the level of an ordinary online novel. It was okay at the beginning, but then became more and more ordinary. The plot construction is beyond praise.
◆In general, I really don't recommend watching it. I rarely give bad reviews, but I really can't understand why this book has such a high rating. It's too much to describe.
There are three evaluation angles: setting, plot, and writing (accounting for 4/3/3)
[Setting] Gegou gets full marks.
Zhou Luoshi has a very good brotherly sense and is very handsome. He is responsible and loyal (it makes sense that the supporting characters would like him). There is a huge turning point in the micro-growth stage, and he feels a faint love for Shou; Shou is a very upright dog, and has been asking her husband to do ten thousand things for Zhou Luoshi. From the first moment they met, he was obsessed with Zhou Luoshi. Even if he was thrown away due to the plot, he still loves and hates him and still remains infatuated.
[The plot] (actually what I want to say most is this) has certain flaws. Personally, I feel that the setting of Zhou Luoshi's father's identity as a singer is not necessary and does not blend naturally with the entire article. I would venture to guess that this setting is because Zhou Luoshi must be given a reasonable force majeure to leave him behind, and Zhou Luoshi's character image must be maintained. It is understandable, but the writing is still a bit stiff and can be polished.
[The writing style] is okay, with the fluency of a normal online writing level. Because the setting is a foreigner, he speaks a mixture of broken English and Chinese. I don't have any feelings for it. Some people think it's cute and some people think it's too embarrassing. It's a matter of opinion.
◆Overall, it's pretty good. There are flaws in the plot but not major ones. Brother Gou enjoys eating better, so it's fair to say the flaws don't hide the flaws. I give it five stars out of selfishness.
There are three evaluation angles: setting, plot, and writing (accounting for 4/3/3)
[Setting] Mei Shuai Su is a powerful and gentle maple leaf baby! It's hard not to like this kind of beauty. It really comes from the strength of the soul from the heart, and the personality stands upright in heaven and earth without any shame.
Posted a previous comment: "I love Maple Leaf like this. Freed from blood, evil and endless darkness, my heart is always proud. I don't hate right and wrong, but I use my hatred to wash away all evil and become my soul... With the sword drawn together, Maple Leaf alone tempers the blood and hatred, and the sword is pointed at more evil, but Ling Yun and the others only attack mortal beings in the end. All these things, don't they provide an excellent explanation for why Maple Leaf became a god?"
It seems that Shou is pretty in appearance, has a high status and a strong character, and has an arrogance that suits the character's status. The emotional relationship between the two people is relatively normal, and there is no particular preference for one side when promoting the relationship normally.
[Plot] Maple Leaf has been extremely successful in shaping the plot, but the other plots are difficult to describe in a word, and the emotional line does not account for much. The problems include but are not limited to:
The two supporting characters take up too much of the scene from beginning to end. The main way to advance the plot is to set up reasonable but meaningless misunderstandings and conflicts. Shou has identity and ability but cannot use it for 10,001 reasons and can only be used as a half-part. The plot of some copies is too complicated... It makes people choke on their throats after watching it.
[Writing] Normal online writing level. But if the cumbersomeness of some plots is included in the writing, it needs to be improved.
◆Overall, the quality does not hide its flaws, and no matter how biased it is, it cannot be too biased, so I gave it four stars instead of five stars.
When I came back and looked again, I found the solution v. . Broken. Liliyue, I miss you so much. You are beautiful, cute and strong. I am really sad. I miss you so much. . . [Crying] [crying]
Goddess I love you forever.
Here are the comments after the completion of the first world:
[I don't like the character design of Zha Gong, but the author's writing is good, very good. After reading it, I felt really disappointed. I felt that it was a light and refreshing article, but there was a great truth in its logic. I didn't know where to start. Moreover, the author has a good grasp of the psychology of the characters. In just 8 chapters, Yu Yanbai's understanding and feelings are described in a precise and accurate manner, although there are some gaps, no more, no less, and the blank space is quite good, and he can say everything in one sentence. It is a piece of writing created by a very quiet writing style.
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