Complaints and comments for personal use. There are non-CP romances and beautiful ones, so pay attention to distinguish them. Four stars are edible, five stars are highly recommended.
The first half is still good-looking. I like to give it five stars for the characters and emotional lines. Gugu and Lin are both devoted to the pure love God of War.
There are very few writers who make me feel the same tiredness as me. It is quite torture for everyone to keep writing when I can't finish writing. The battle line drags out the ending and swallows up the setting.
I originally wanted to give it five stars, but after some hesitation I gave it four stars based on my subjective preference.
The character creation in this book is very good, and there are some parts of the plot that cannot be dwelled upon, but minor bugs are harmless. The most exciting thing is the plot of the protagonist's childhood. My wife's description of the child was so vivid that my mental state jumped repeatedly between the child being so annoying and the woo-woo baby being so brave, smart and cute.
I deducted one star because I didn't like that the protagonist who grew up later was still as willful and unreasonable as a child in many cases. I felt that everyone was coaxing the child... This is a personal reason, and I understand the logic of the plot. I will read my wife's other stories in the future.
The title and copywriting are too tacky. I checked the copywriting three times and failed to get it right. Can you please change it? How come there is such a beautiful article?
It's very beautiful, with detailed and full details. Almost all major events can be compared with history, and the sense of immersion is super strong. I read it over and over again.
The only drawback is that the title and copywriting are too crude and I have no career line. The first half is the career line of attack and the growth line of reception. There are actually some signs of Shou's career line in the Shanghai stock market, but it was not written in depth. As a result, the second half of the book was all about the love between son and daughter, without a strong enough supporting plot. It clearly feels like something has been cut.
As mentioned earlier, Bai Jiu was harmed by someone in his previous life. Miss Hong and Xiao Xie didn't have time to find out the result, and the hole was not filled. There is no clear and complete plot in the past life, so it is not easy to put together. The first part seems to be that Bai Jiu was killed by others, and the war broke out and he fled south a few years after his death. However, the later part is that the war was already very serious when Bai Jiu died. It doesn't feel right here.
It would be nice if there were more extra episodes. I would also enjoy watching it on a daily basis.
The world view is grand and complete, the setting is magnificent, and the characters are full and interesting.
The whole style of the book is very light and humorous, and it is sweet and sweet to my heart. But as Tiantian said, the adventurers are just bystanders, and they always feel that the passion of the game is missing.