There are reviews on the plot and emotions. I have read a lot of articles and they are mixed. I can feel for myself whether they are salty or indifferent. Some of them are recommended only because the deputy CP likes them. Please read the reviews carefully.
Overall it's okay, the mood is up, and the rendering is pretty good. Generally speaking, it is very qualified as an emotional theme. I picked up the younger brother earlier, the importance of the younger brother, and the overall foreshadowing and description background are all very smooth. You can do more emotional drama.
But the climax when my brother returns to the arrow always feels very sudden. This suddenness does not refer to why you suddenly fell in love. It is a problem that the first perspective is completely unable to observe what the other person is thinking. Adding the God's perspective later cannot make up for the suddenness. Sure enough, the first perspective has certain limitations on the work. This is also the reason why the third perspective is relatively common. There is really no way to deal with it, so I can understand it.
However, another problem is that the climax is a bit too much of a collection of sadistic incidents. Although the bloody and physical and mental abuse are inseparable, they are too close... And the force is too strong.
And I just hope that the author can restrain his lust. It's really shocking that my princess suddenly appears. Please let me go. And the description of the mental hospital is really casual. Don't treat the mental hospital as your own backyard...
Editor 2: I feel that I have a really strong desire for Nian Shang. Can you be less weird about your oral sex? Please be more restrained.
There are many plots, which are a bit convoluted, but the King and Queen 99 are cute and susceptible to Su's attack, but it is rare that Su is really ice-snow and smart, and has strict shaping, not a golden finger.
[Important] I have a brother who is really orthopedic (jj can't stamp it) but it's delicious! The older brother who has a bad heart and is weak and dotes on his younger brother vs. The younger brother who has been taken care of by his older brother since he was a child. Although he has lost all senses, he really wants to help his older brother.
Later, when the younger brother saw his elder brother in the first scene, the soul of orthopedics was burning [poor] the ps book of all things and orthopedic after-sales service
Meng Su, there is still no meal replacement emperor after all these years. Meng Meng, the logic is clear and logical. The man is brave and resourceful but does not treat others as human beings. He is a standard ruthless and iron-blooded emperor.
Ps: The product sister can't read it because I have two attacks and one receive. I don't like CP. If you like reading cool articles, you can consider it.
The mutual attack (key point) of the secondary CPs is really fun... But the entanglement is too advanced and one of them is too advanced. Generally speaking, it is a very advanced pair of CPs. I was stunned for a while. Although I feel that there is no need to be so advanced... But the arrows of the two are very thick and it feels like they are supporting each other all the time... Ah, I can't comment! Maybe this is postmodern style? It's so sweet to see two people post daily posts while being crazy in their hearts, praising each other everywhere from their hair to their clothes and even their glasses!
The main CP is not my good game. I actually like Proo the best, Lalang Yi Pro x Zhan Luzhong
Since it is plot-oriented, I will judge it according to plot-oriented standards.
① There are many people and it is messy. It can be seen that I am desperately trying to write a group portrait but there is no priority. The characters and forces are piled on top of each other in a chaotic manner, and there is no sense of progression from shallow to deep. Writing group portraits should have a certain linking effect, extending from a to b and then to the big forces behind b, rather than just starting from the beginning.
②In this case, the plot does not go smoothly. I often look at the scene here and am stunned. Who is this, what is this, and where does it come from?
③Even a cannon fodder NPC has to write three or five chapters. Isn't it necessary to write it from time to time? Who do you want to highlight?
④You can really guess the direction of the plot just by seeing the beginning.
But it gets three stars. The emotional scenes are good, and the writing is also very smooth. Except for the inexplicable love at first sight at the beginning, it is smooth. Alas, this plot... I can't write dozens of people. Can you please stop writing it by force? First write the few who are the protagonists.
(Thinking) (Thinking) I can give full marks to the young couple as they are cute and have a sense of fate. But I was very frustrated with the plot... I can't introduce the attributes because I can't remember them. I always feel that everything doesn't have a clear line and is mixed together. It may be my problem. I'll check it out after the second brush...
After reading it, I felt a little uncomfortable.
① I don't think Chen has changed from beginning to end. He still doesn't care much about other people's fragility. He just finds a lover who happens to have a happy family and doesn't need emotional value so much.
② Novels are all about paper people. You can't make people into paper. From the beginning to the end, they are as stable as a balancing device and have no personality at all. Occasionally, there are emotional fluctuations, and they are as unsympathetic as a business...
③The career line is really not good-looking. Because of the career line, the two of them live in different places. It gives people a feeling that they are together and separated without any trouble.
Of course, I can praise it. The writing is good but not too watery. Each chapter is remarkable and has interesting highlights. The main perspective is also well created and has a sense of realism as a small character.
I feel much better after Returning from the Next Door. The two protagonists portrayed there are good. In this book, Chen's portrayal is quite good, but Lu is not good at all. The love relationship also makes me feel that the relationship is very fragile [Tickling]
To be honest, the overall level is pretty good among new authors, but for newbies.
①Gongshou is really about true love, and you can read it with confidence. ②The characters you write are the same. The fox and the puppy are just right. You won't feel childish after reading it, but you will feel worthy of being a fox and a puppy. It's a good post. ③It's all about a love story. You will definitely be in a good mood when you open it. You will be happy when you read it when you are unhappy. A stable loving couple.
But I have to say no, the overall plot rhythm is really gentle, and love can also be written with wonderful ups and downs, but now it has neither gone up nor down... Maybe it is a new author who is still looking for a rhythm, and I look forward to progress.
Very cute bunt
The author is also quite new, this is her third book.
①Gong and Shou are childhood sweethearts, but they can still taste the taste of the next year, very cute ②The personality is really well reflected, Gong will impress people a little more, because the character of Xiaoniao is really rare, and Shou is very calm and calm, and actually has a bit of a tomboy(?), Which complements each other very well! ③The daily interactions are really cute. When Gong's feathers were burnt, Shou stuck them on him. Gong didn't notice at all and was still thinking about why he had severe hair loss. ④He is very polite. Gong first helped Shou to untie her heart knot, and then Shou would confess to Gong in front of the whole city.
People watching are so cute [ bursting into tears ] What a cute little couple
Overall, it's considered excellent... But it's really awkward (worrying)
Let me praise you: ① The upbringing part is really cute, and the crazy love at the end of the year is really crazy love. The double arrow is so thick that I can't live without you. ②The character is really very suave. The part where he led a family of four to escape and set off fireworks for the old man really reflected his character very well. He is kind but not a virgin.
③The whole thing is really romantic and like a fairy tale. In the end, I really want to wish them to be together forever and feel very happy.
Disadvantages: ① The words at the back are inexplicably starting to unfold a big plot that I can't understand. It's extremely messy and I don't know what I'm doing. During that time, the comment area was also a cool 78 times an hour, so I'm probably not the only one who thinks it's not good.
② This book really has no character. The other books all portray alien creatures slowly integrating into the earth and identifying with people. After reading it, you will feel like "the child has grown up." This book feels like the author has forgotten this... Later, the light speed grows into a complete body and the light speed is completed after the light speed is offline. It feels more like functionality than growth... It is not as good as Xu Dan and Xiao Lu.
It feels more like a popular science article for people with bipolar and severe depression than an article. I feel that the author is thoughtful in many places and it can be seen that he has checked the information and written it very seriously. Finally, he will no longer regard mental illness as a fashion item... Shou Zai Gong helped Gong when he was the most out of control and desperate. After a few years, he reunited with Gong and helped Shou. In the end, although Gong was not cured, Shou's promise was: If you can't persist, then I will die with you.
So romantic.
Perfect! Nothing to complain about
① We were childhood sweethearts in our previous life, but unfortunately we were destined to be together again in this life. Although we are separated by life and death, we do not remember our past lives, but we still fell in love with each other regardless of everything.
② It's very smooth, and the rhythm of the article is very well controlled. You won't find it difficult to skip while reading it, and there are even many metaphors that can make you smile.
③The feeling of running in both directions is particularly strong. Shou is willing to die for Gong. Gong also sees Shou who has lost control and would rather be killed by him than hurt him. Is there any more steadfast love than this? [Please]
④The ending is also very satisfying, the sweet he and the psychological description of the attack before he are so delicious, the feeling of not being able to live without each other is particularly strong, five-star praise [please]
A particularly well-matched couple... A couple who are willing to give everything for each other.
He was loved to the point of being desperate and crazy, he was hard-spoken and soft-hearted, so he secretly helped Shou bear all the hurt. He was so painful that he fell into a coma and still said, "As long as I have one breath left, the other person can sleep soundly." At the end, when Shou took out a few beautiful feathers that Gagako had saved even when he was at his lowest, it was really funny to laugh at the same time in pain [please]. There is a slight flaw in that, in the second half, Shoujo spent too little time together.
It was not easy to find Benmei Gong, but when he thought about the emotional scenes, he felt a bit stuck in his throat... In the end, Gong had been looking for Shou and had been tortured for several years, but the only reason why he couldn't bear it was that he was afraid of Gong blame him. This...
Two people are in love, but they are disfigured and their hands are broken because of the attack... And then both of them are happy, so, that's okay (.)
The master and apprentice fall in love and make everyone fly and then turn them into a part of his play. The author's humor sometimes makes me laugh out loud, but the plot is a little repetitive... Oh, forget it, it's just sweet. If the young couple is sticky for 100 chapters, I can read another 100 chapters.
The top of 2025 is here [Fireworks]
① The reading experience is very good. Once you are immersed in it, you will be surprised when you read it again and again. ② The two-way needs of the young couple are very strong. It is very rare to experience the water. ③ The climax emotion is really pushed up. ④ The emotions are very delicate and the characters are three-dimensional. I have already written a 3000-word long review and I really can't hold it in anymore... Come and eat my Amway, okay!
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