Chaotic and omnivorous party with a lot of sexual tendencies but a lot of bl, xp for foreigners/pregnant husband/forced reception/golden pupils. Recently, I mainly watch Zerg and keep updating.
Overall, it's a good article and worth reading. The only drawback is that the equal rights part is relatively immature, the villain saved at the beginning is still haunting and disgusting, and the behavior of the protagonist described at the beginning is a bit too young.
It's okay, the writing is readable, and it's a brainless little sweet article. One star is deducted because the writing on the secondary CP is a bit disgusting. The plot is quite good, but the writing is a bit bland and the ending is a bit rushed.
Were you pissed off after watching half of it? I'm not criticizing anyone, but most of the story is about Ivor being humble and actively approaching Sears. If it weren't for the fake death plot, it would actually be delicious. The relationship between the two has always been unequal, and Ivor has always felt insecure. The well-written part about Ivor's reaction after Sears faked his death was very well written and able to arouse emotions. If it hadn't been for this part, I wouldn't have been traumatized. Ten years have passed since Sears faked his death and there has been no news. After they reunited and the misunderstanding was not resolved, Ivor easily forgave him without much struggle. Human emotions are very complicated. I don't believe that a person who can try to turn back time after the death of his lover until he dies of mental exhaustion is suffering for ten years. Years later, I found out that I had been deceived, and I felt no hatred or grievance. Just like after Sherlock faked his death for three years and reunited, Watson's first reaction was to punch him and ignore him for a long time. Even though he later forgave Sherlock, this faked death experience really left a crack in the relationship between the two. The previous and following plots both felt very smooth and interesting, but in this episode, I felt as if Ivor had been forcibly manipulated by the plot and forgiven... The character suddenly became very thin, and he turned back into the image of a person with a love brain. Although it's not his fault that Sears was forced to fake his death, I was really blown away by this plot. After the reunion, if I describe the intertwined struggles of love, hate, grievance, resentment and multiple emotions in Iver's heart, I pretend not to know and play with the general. In the end, I find that my love is still greater than my hatred and let go. After solving the misunderstanding, I find that my lover has also suffered a lot, and then he becomes sweet and sweet. The plot will be reasonable and much more delicious. Moreover, the bug cub brought up by Ivor knew that Sears was alive a year or two before Ivor but didn't even tell him. It's a bit hard to judge...
Kanwen has always been a silent reader. I haven't written a comment for many years, but the more I think about it, the more I get angry. Zhuo! I can give the whole story a five-star rating without talking about the faked death episode. After reading the story, I reluctantly accepted the reason why Sears had not been heard from for ten years. I also accepted some plot explanations such as the adjutant's motivations, and the extras also appeased some of them? But there is always a lingering feeling of nausea.