I specifically post things I regret after subscribing. I feel sorry for my daughter and I don't blame her. Generally speaking, if you don't rule out bad writing, the writing in the guide will at least be of a passing standard.
Sit at the same table as the book "The Ugly Guide to the Yandere".
The main text has nothing to do with the content. The plot is confusing and the perspective changes abruptly. The main plot of the whole text cannot be explained clearly. What's more important is that the male protagonist of Sword Man, if it weren't for him, the female protagonist would be fine. 90% Of the suffering comes from him, vomiting blood.
One star review. I ordered it all just for this review - the author dared to write but didn't let me comment, so he deleted the review haha, and only deleted my demining of the book but not my positive discussion about the book, which shows his character.
In this case, the author and I can only finish the review, which can last a thousand words.
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The following is the text (copying the comment that was deleted by the author. I have appealed now, but I don't know if it will pass):
①The male protagonist has been kissed by his female counterpart.
②The story relies on the heroine being in distress and being injured. Not to mention the first chapter, which is about the hero dating a good blind date and the heroine having an affair. Subsequent plots include but are not limited to the heroine being injured, the heroine's daughter having a fever, the heroine's crush (clear love) despising the heroine's second marriage and raising a child, the heroine's best friend talking nonsense about her scumbag ex-husband (talking to the hero, who would do such a good girlfriend?), And the hero's family despising the heroine's divorce and having a second child.
③Although I am presumptuous, I would like to say that the female protagonist is the highlight recorder of the male protagonist. The free chapter has 0 highlights for the heroine. She is either injured, pestered by men, or being belittled. Compared to the male protagonist, she is so awesome (yin and yang), saving people, the heroine, and her daughter.
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The following is a supplement:
①I objectively stated the plot in the article, mixed with personal emotions. The reason why the author deleted the comment was "whether the male protagonist who clears mines is clean or not?"
Can you please tell me if you can't see such a big paragraph at the back? There are a total of 200 words of demining, and the first sentence only has seven words. Are the eyes growing on the baby boy? Or does the author simply want to delete my comment?
②As in the preface at the beginning, the author deletes only negative comments (even if the comment is objectively based on the plot of the article), leaving the positive subjective content to me. Too funny. I want to avoid this author forever.
③Write the plot of the best friend talking about the heroine. It is a blessing for the heroine to have such a best friend. I hope to give the author one too. That's great. The gods intend it. As long as you have such a good best friend to assist you, you can get the pursuit of the male god~
(Actually, after several weeks, I have forgotten the general plot. Only this good bestie made me feel stuck in my throat. She leaked information about the heroine without authorization and told others about her extremely disgusting ex-boyfriend... I wouldn't feel so uncomfortable if I had a bad-smelling male friend, but this is my best friend).
④The heroine is very pitiful. Everyone around her is a scumbag, including the male one. She can only passively bear all the suffering and passively accept the "salvation" that can only come from the male one, but the author calls it "love".
⑤Why can such an article be collected by 10,000 people? Fortunately, the nutrient solution was only half full, which meant that there were still many people alive.
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Conclusion.
I didn't write a thousand words, but there were still 900 words. I typed every word sincerely.
Originally I just had an opinion on the plot, because I knew the author relied on it for a living, so I turned a blind eye and turned a blind eye. I didn't give a negative mark, but my review was deleted... I can only express my doubts and speculations about the author's character from this. I hope that such a bad work will be lost in the millions of books in Jinjiang. It is best that no one cares about it, including the author.
... I'm so confused. Nine out of ten chronicle books are misleading.
The male protagonist is too greasy. This is the first time I have seen an author who writes greasy kissing scenes and boat scenes. He is also a beet.
In addition, the female protagonist is very passive. In the first chapter, there is the feeling that "the female protagonist is the male protagonist's possession", like an object, like a doll, without a sense of being alive, and the slap in the face depends on the male protagonist.
In addition, the female competition is fierce, and the female partner ends up with a "tragic ending" of marrying a bad man.
Vomit.
Many people recommend this book, but I have to say: the male protagonist is a failure.
Before the male protagonist appeared, the female coach exploded in the sky; after the male protagonist appeared, the highlight shifted to him.
But this is a group portrait, but I still feel uncomfortable.
She is a strong woman, but I have a nauseous feeling like a lump in my throat.
Obviously the heroine is very fleshed out and has a well-developed career line. I also confirm that I love her... But I just feel sad and disgusting for no reason.
I have never felt this way about a fanfic article of the same type, and I am not willing to recommend this article to others.
If anyone knows the answer please let me know, really confused.
I can freely decide whether I love the female protagonist or the male protagonist. The author himself also explained that if you like strong female protagonists, go next door and don't read this book.
——The female protagonist's efforts become a foil for the male protagonist's appearance, and the focus of the description is obviously on the male protagonist:
The author writes about the plot of "The female protagonist is very strong and worked hard, but lost the battle to the male protagonist." If the author loves the heroine, her focus should be "the heroine is strong and hardworking", but the fact is that the author focuses on "losing to the male protagonist".
——Even if there is a copy, what if women are strong and men are weak? Strong women are still meant to highlight the weakness of the male protagonist.
But the author doesn't think so. I feel uncomfortable.
... I really didn't expect that this thing could write 700,000 words.
When I was serializing it, I said it was unfair, and a group of people refuted me.
But other than water, it's okay. It's just a decent book, but I still regret buying it.
The female protagonist of the camera, all stereotyped words can be used to describe her, as if she has no independent life, it is very sad, but I don't blame her.
The highlight is all on the male protagonist, who is always on the road of "hero saving beauty".
Too lazy to talk about it, next one.
After returning from Rebirth, I am still a love brain.
The heroine is a queen mother, "blushing and heart-beating", "powerless", "frail and fragile", the author is willing to make the hero so tall and noble, but he chooses to write her like this. Not one of the thirty completed book reviews praises her... It can be seen.
It's not her fault and she's helpless. I feel sad.
The male protagonist PUAs the female protagonist, emphasizing that she is his possession.
There are clips of male condensation in the article, the male protagonist is yy and the beautiful dancer has a vision of the male protagonist. It's not my fault for misunderstanding, it's my fault that the author's writing is so masculine that it's disgusting.
The female protagonist will always be beaten and scolded, while the male protagonist will always gain fame and fortune, and the highlight will always be on him.
I broke my guard and I have to say, the heroine is so pitiful.
The female protagonist is described as retarded, and the male protagonist is all in the male protagonist's growth line, while the female protagonist is always my child, my child 666.
Author Dream Girl Literature, next.
The female protagonist is the wronged tool × the empathic but not the tough-tongued male protagonist.
The promotion of the relationship depends entirely on the heroine being hurt. The heroine is hurt and drugged throughout the book. It's so terrible, I feel so bad for her.
The female protagonist also paid a very heavy price for the male protagonist.
…
I really want to buy the full text and leave a negative review, but the thought of giving money to the author who wrote such a thing makes me choke.
Enough, I've eaten enough garbage——
The writing is deceptive, the male protagonist is mean-mouthed, the female protagonist is in a hurry, the supporting characters are paired with each other, forcibly creating misunderstandings, and the plot of female competition continues one after another.
To sum up:
——This is a refreshing article for men.
I forgot the plot, maybe the heroine was rich and beautiful, but the first thing she did when she arrived at a new place was to lick the hero...? I don't understand.
After I posted a negative review for this book, the author also sent me a red envelope. Although the red envelope is small, it can be seen that the author's character is not bad. Give it three stars. If you like watching women chasing men, go read it yourself.
I forgot the specific plot, but I will summarize it based on the historical book review I left: the male protagonist is stupid and his son is stupid, the female protagonist has few highlight scenes, and the unscrupulous author will refund his money.
It's a tall one among the short ones, but it's just unfinished. The main plot is not interesting, but the relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is okay. Boring to watch.
One star. Women lose their power, the plot drags extremely hard, I regret my money.
I hate deleting comments! I didn't give a bad review! ! I also said I was looking forward to the next plot, but I deleted it anyway. Hateful.
The tallest person among the short ones, the female protagonist is on camera, the male protagonist's highlights are larger than the female protagonist and are built on her body.
The character of the male protagonist is too fleshed out, which makes me really unhappy. The author obviously loves men more.
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