It's rotten, extremely rotten, purely insane, both offensive and defensive. Procrastination, copywriting liar. From the third time the book was written, it began to collapse like a lump in the throat.
In the early stage, the character design of the protagonist is okay, but when it comes to the plot of losing the horse, it is not exciting at all. In the later stage, it is just a mess. You might as well write a non-CP, but it may be more confusing.
The collapse in the later stage was too severe, it was completely driven high and low, it was magical, and the late stage was too delayed, just for the sake of being tortured.
Ending heart attack, grass.
The first few chapters were full of question marks, but chapters 10-60 were very well written, and then the plot seemed to be written by the author on his own feet. It was definitely perfunctory and didn't want to be written anymore. It's heartbreaking and hasty.
I stayed up late until four o'clock in the morning, that's what this shit is. It's precisely because you still have good-looking things, so I'm particularly angry at the bad things about you, Smiling Cat, you don't have to write about it if you don't want to.
I'm convinced.
The protagonist's personality is good and very charming, but you will definitely not write well in the later stage.
The ending was a bit rushed, and some foreshadowings were not explained clearly. Other than that, the writing was pretty good. I'm really sorry for the ending.
I once made a note about "May Day, bad ending, heart attack"
Chunfeng Yao's first book, Blacklist! "But then it smelled so good, Chunfeng Yao, do I love you?"