It's good-looking, and the narrative is complete. It would be nice if it could be expanded on a little more. It's good-looking! This article was buried, my grades shouldn't be so bad.
It is understood that this article was written because of the small town. My final feeling is that the author's attitude towards the small town is acceptance, acceptance of origin, unbearableness, and inequality (acceptance here may not be accurate, because I think the most real change is closely related to acceptance, but sometimes change has to take the first step, and acceptance will follow) and move forward with your own hope, even if it is climbing. The protagonist has unbearable encounters. My personal feeling is that these encounters are points of growth. Shen Qingfei has his own persistence and will not be trapped by it. What he wants is to be number one, and what he is determined to do is number one.
If you come back from the conference, I still want to see a broader display of this world, whether it's a spin-off or a companion piece. I love you and the characters you write.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that I will add the relationship between the protagonists. In a word, their personalities complement each other. Both of them have gaps and they just complement each other.