The operation is as fierce as a tiger, but the actual progress is zero [laughing and crying] The ambiguous pull is very touching, and the setting is very frustrating.
This article gave me a feeling of hard work without merit. The heroine started from a too low level and worked her way up step by step. It was not a very good flow of writing. The author also wrote rather dryly.
It's okay to drive a sidecar, but the plot thief can't write it down. It doesn't feel like it's good at all. The plot doesn't advance at all, and the "little pregnant belly" of the giant thunder man can't be rated 12 stars.
Flaws do not cover up strengths. I had read more than thirty chapters before and stopped reading it. I picked it up and read it again from the beginning two days ago. The overall main line of the heroine changes from introversion to extroversion. I think the idea of daring to socialize is very good. The description of the scenic spots is also very detailed. It can be seen that she has done her homework. The setting of an independent freelance female entrepreneur is great. The system villain is also very cute
Personally, I feel that there are many shortcomings. 1: I personally don't like the male protagonist. I don't understand why there is a flat paper male protagonist. There are many elements added to the male protagonist. He has transformed from an 18th-tier star to a big star. He has good cooking skills and has the baggage of a star, but he has no charm. It feels like it would be better to have no male protagonist.
2. The setting of the heroine is not very realistic, and feels a bit contradictory. Her parents ask her to take the civil service examination, and the heroine can go directly to Shanghai to find her best friend and work as a freelance painter. However, in some chapters of more than 30 chapters, the heroine is introverted and timid and dare not take the high-speed train. I personally feel that it is not reasonable. The parents know that their daughter is so introverted and they force her to take the civil service examination? The heroine at the beginning gave me such an introverted attitude that she might not even dare to claim her prize if she won the lottery.
3. I don't really like the portrayal of the heroine's parents. The father is open-minded and willing to change his mind to support his daughter. The mother slowly changed under his father's guidance. It wasn't until the heroine took her parents out to travel that the mother figured it out. All the details in the middle made the heroine's mother unlikable.
4. As a system novel, the heroine uses the system to exchange for food, drink, and entertainment. Many of them are relatively daily, and there is nothing special about it. I can understand that if it is too exaggerated, it does not seem like sponsorship and does not meet the heroine's consumption level, so it is not considered a system novel.
5. The final ending of the heroine is still the same as the hero going to confess to him... This is my personal reason. I am really fed up with this kind of ending. A person whose role as the hero only has a clear presence in the ending part is actually an important role in the ending chapter of this article. Alas, I can understand that the heroine's career has progressed and love is indispensable. Moreover, I also want to see the heroine's career go to a higher level. The career line is too short and leaves too much room for one's own imagination, haha.
6. As a travel article, the heroine in the full text mainly travels in the great rivers and mountains in China. It only covers parts of Thailand, Sri Lanka, and Africa abroad. There are still many places that have not been written. It is a pity that I could continue to write more.
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