It's cool online, the overall rhythm is smooth, and the female characters are particularly good.
The story is a bit simple, but it is very complete, and the 370,000-word text contains very good information. There is no watery chapter, and the ending is not bad. I cried while reading it.
When I read Zuo Hua, I realized that it was the author's first book. It was the first time I could write such a quality and I felt it was amazing. When I read it, I didn't feel green at all (except for a few chapters one or two, which were only part of one chapter).
Generally speaking: the plot is a bit simple, the characterization is not full, but not thin either; the concept is very good, the rhythm is reasonable, and it is refreshing online. It is worth watching in your spare time. A no brainer.
(I picked this up from the book Parasite. It looks like the author has made great progress!)
A very good story. Story 10 logic 10 writing 8 character creation 8. It is a rare small world with a large size. Unfortunately, the size is limited. There are inevitably flaws in the details of the world view and the emotional foreshadowing of the characters, but the overall flaws are not concealed.
Extra points: the important roles (good and bad) are all mainly female, which is great to watch
Additional points: The heroine has a particularly large appetite and her food tastes delicious.
Detailed review:
I won't comment on the part involving physics because I don't understand it. I just look at the structure and character creation of the article: the 42,000-word volume presents such a huge world view and a complete and rich character image in the world view. The protagonist and supporting characters are fully shaped, the foreshadowing is in place, and the pace is relaxed and relaxed. I didn't feel tired or bored from watching it yesterday to this afternoon. I can also think and discuss the world view from the perspective of the protagonist. The degree of completion is quite amazing. There are indeed flaws in the writing, but they are only flaws compared to "perfection". As a carrier of the story, the writing of this work is also very smooth.
In terms of details, I actually think that this work can be expanded to about 800,000 words based on the amount of information it currently covers. As a result, every appearance of the character arc is a little rushed, and the effect presented may be a little discounted from the effect the author wants to express (you can feel what scenes or emotions the author wants to express in certain parts).
Probably (maybe) the author wanted to express 10 in his heart and wrote 8. But even with only these 8 points, readers can be moved by 10. A good story can give people a shock that transcends writing and structure.
But it is precisely the flaws in this writing that make people feel that the author has unlimited potential and is looking forward to subsequent works.
Contains spoilers:
In the ending, Sister Ni becomes the commander-in-chief. In this article, the commander-in-chief is equivalent to the leader, so it feels a bit strange. Maybe it's because every era has its mission. I always feel that Sister Ni is better at being a general in war times than a leader in peace times. But this is just a small point. If Sister Ni is really allowed to save the world and has to be controlled by others, I will definitely not be happy ()
A very true novel.
I tend to be the type of reader who believes that a very important part of the charm of a work comes from the shortcomings of the characters. The characters of Old Swan basically have obvious advantages and disadvantages, and they are not the shortcomings of "novel writing" that can be regarded as enjoyable, but are real and realistic shortcomings that make you think of the people around you and instantly become irritated. The same is true for this movie. Even if the first-person female protagonist filter is fully turned on, the shortcomings of the male protagonist are still obvious (which is also one of the charming parts). Of course, the advantages of everyone in the article are equally charming, especially Xiao Wang. Most of the heroines in the author's works have the charm of being as charming as warm water in plainness.
I like this type of work very much. At the same time, Old Swan's writing style is quite sophisticated, delicate, humorous, and pays attention to logic. Emotions are gradually revealed through analysis. Every time the male and female protagonists confess their inner feelings, they are very sincere and moving. I read the "Other World" series before looking for this article. The two "Other Worlds" are relatively weak in the portrayal of emotions. I didn't expect that the emotions are written so well in this one.
In addition, I generally only regard "female consciousness" as one of the many points that add or subtract points for novels, and will not arbitrarily define a certain work because of this. The works of Old Swan I have seen so far are all interesting in concept, and each one is worth pondering. Including this one, they are all very mature works.
The above is the reason why I ordered it all.
Therefore, even if it is based on all the above reasons, it is only given three stars because it is really unbearable: although the "Alien" series has begun to take shape, "Werewolf" is a later work, and I really didn't expect that female consciousness was probably only 19 years ago. It's so uncomfortable, the stereotypes between the lines, I can only persuade myself that it is essentially a good story, and some shortcomings are unavoidable. However, as long as you have some requirements for female consciousness, it is not recommended to read this article.
Of course, this is just one of the many advantages and disadvantages of the text, but it's just like the smelly water in the corner of the bathroom. It doesn't affect that I still like to live in this house, but I can't help but get upset when I smell it.
Regardless of this point, the plot structure, writing style, foreshadowing and recycling of this book are still five-star good-looking, and the wording is concise. It is like doing charity to see such a good story for a little money. The three-star rating is completely for my own personal reason.
A very attractive story, giving the impression that the characters exist mainly to serve the story, and the character perspective is one of the perspectives of the entire story for readers to peek into. In this case, the choices and struggles of the characters will appear more moving. The characters with little mention can also have strong appeal. The writing style is mature and delicate, and the information content is large. It is not tiring to read at all. You can read it in one sitting. It is a pleasure to read. Recommended
Three hundred thousand words brings such a mature and complete world view, a story that is clean and neat in plot presentation and yet delicate at the same time. It is so powerful.
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