First person, the first part is beautiful and funny [Star Eyes], but I got tired of watching almost half of it and couldn't stand it any longer, and the second part is so concentrating.
History. I only ordered it because you were honest. This book is not cool at all and it pisses me off to death. . . In the previous life, was this the emperor's inferiority complex? And it's so disgusting that I can't stand it.
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Editor 2: When I read Chapter 25, I felt like it was another history of Soviet aggression. Is this still the main story of Shou? Where did it come from? There were so many personal lines of attack in the previous 25 chapters. Where is the personal line of Shou? ...
Editor 3: [rolls eyes]. I won't say whether the strong attack in the early stage is stronger, after all, the setting is reasonable. However, most of the highlights of the career line of the main goalkeeper are attacking, and at the end of the game, the recipient's hand is also arranged to twist. I don't know what it means. Before Gong and Shou got together, even before Shou fell in love with each other, it was really hard to criticize the people around him for teasing Gong and Shou [rolling their eyes]. The reader knew from God's perspective that the two would be together, but the supporting characters in the article all acquiesced to Shou and Gong, which was very disrespectful and completely disrespectful. There is also the classic fight between the upper and lower parties. Every time there is such a link, I will just think that the party that is unwilling to compromise is the party that has no compromise. It is very uncomfortable. How about you write mutual attacks [helpless].
As an e-sports novel, it's hard for me to comment on the fact that when the two protagonists fall in love, they can have practice the next day and bang bang bang the night before. The plot becomes more and more complicated as it goes on, the key matches are completely brushed off, and the emotional scenes towards the end are also very dull and boring. I was unlucky if I didn't plan everything without thinking.