Cyber cultivating immortality, the sun is shining brightly through the male high dog × the flower of the high mountain, Master Long Aotian. Full marks in my mind. Although I encountered plot problems during the serialization process, the author is very good at digesting the problems and responding to the readers. He is a rare author who can still solve problems without changing his original intention of writing.
Part 22025/10/24
I looked at the author's pre-receipt and saw that it was fake bones, and the formula was suspected to be Shizun 2.0 And Shizun Brother 2.0. After the modification, the plot of the brother seemed to be the same as the brother with the same white moonlight and cinnabar mole in the master's heart. However, because the characters and emotional lines of this article were well written, there was no way to deduct points for being ruthless.
Part Three 2025/10/25
I got emotional after seeing the revised chapter yesterday, so the second editor made some very hurtful remarks, and the author responded sincerely. I also learned that the setting of brothers in advance is different from the Jiang brothers in this article. I feel very guilty and sorry to the author and teacher, and I hope it did not affect the teacher's writing mood.
After weighing it again and again, I still feel that this article is indeed worth reading. Even though Jiang Jixue's performance of Jiang Moxing's death will be controversial later, the most important and core emotional scene between the protagonists is impeccable, and it is a must-read in the underworld.
It's a wonderful infrastructure story. The relationship between attack and attack complements each other. The emotional and career lines are very smooth. The plot is well written and the characters are vividly created.
In high school, I secretly picked up my phone every night to catch up on updates. I loved it then, but I miss it so much now. Every time I think about it, I have a different feeling.
At first glance, it looks like an ancient version of Harry Potter. It's rare that I like the protagonist's story more than the supporting character. Because I read it in high school, I can't remember the plot clearly. I only remember that the part about being melted is very good.
The god of setting, the dog sister I love most in my life. But the writing is very clear, and the whole story has four stars. I give all four stars to it.