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The setting of the article and the theme of the short story are quite good, but the story often ends smoothly and smoothly when it reaches the climax, and it lacks some plot tension. The protagonist's emotions and reactions in the story also feel a bit like an NPC. Some important plot points happen with almost no emotional foreshadowing or character reaction, resulting in readers lacking resonance and sense of involvement with the characters when reading, and feeling a bit like reading a story outline. For example, the article mentions the heroine's mental state several times when she is wronged and retaliated against some evil ghosts, but it is briefly touched upon. For example, when the heroine was fused at the end, the male protagonist told the ghost that she doesn't love me. These details are not enough foreshadowing or continuation in the plot of the article, making them a bit inexplicable. Finally, there are also flaws in the plot setting. Although the heroine seems to have a "golden finger", the resolution of important events almost has nothing to do with her, such as Xishui Village, such as the final fusion of ghosts. The heroine basically "wins" by lying down, either fainting or semi-fainting. The problem is solved by two evil differences. Not only the halo of the heroine is dimmed, but the male protagonist and even the male supporting actor fail to show their full character charm. Although I mentioned a lot of shortcomings, the overall two points are actually quite obvious. When I saw that this article was written in 2019, I silently raised the score by one star, haha.