The rating is as above. The reading process was still very enjoyable. Although I skipped chapters, I still ordered it in full. The article was originally written a few years ago, so it's normal to have parts that don't fit the current reading experience. Moreover, the author is willing to overhaul the entire text, so I think it's quite good. Overall, it's a pretty good little story. A few flaws are not a big problem. Keep up the good work, author!