Heroine / Food Management / Different World / Warm Fairy Tale
The little sun devil who can think of eating everything he looks at x the angel with a hard mouth and a soft heart who can blush
The story of opening gourmet restaurants all over the continent and saving the world.
It's a warm little daily life, everyone has a happy ending, and you can meet new friends every time you go to a new place.
The disadvantage is that it has some flaws at the beginning, but then it gradually gets better. In the second half, there are relatively few food operations, and it is more focused on the main plot. The main plot is a bit suffocating (mainly the self-talk of the gods). A group of violent little idiots who are trapped in prejudice wake up one by one and work for the heroine. Jpg. From a distance, the main plot looks like a big oolong, which is also consistent with a fairy tale ()
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Picture sense:
1. Every time you go to a new map, there will be new race settings, landforms, and stories, and the corresponding restaurant style will also change.
2. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is very natural, although there are not many emotional scenes.
3. Other characters also have their own characteristics, such as demons, cute red dragons, lizard men, elves, etc. There are a few couples at the end of the extra chapter that are promising, let's take a quick look [dog's head holding a rose]
25.12.26
The overall flow is smooth, and the game is played in a sand sculpture style (bushi). The disadvantage is that there are too many complaints. The highlight is that each new character that appears can be singled out as the protagonist, and the characters, atmosphere, small thoughts, etc. Are very graphically portrayed.
You can take a bite of everything, and this big stew of Shura is so refreshing.
There are many characters with single-pointed female protagonists. She is very good at describing shy boys, but she has too much (?) Thinking and is not as exciting in the later stages.
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Picture sense
1. There are many, many interesting characters, flying in the sky, swimming in the water, Eastern, Western, older brothers, sisters, younger brothers and sisters, furry——
2. A lot of atmosphere/storyboard description, many races/settings/post-production and demonic realm
3. Oh, there are also many small sand sculpture theaters contributed by Dracula and the Lingxi child who always uses his head as a ball to kick (?)
25.12.22
The imagination is fun, but the emotional drama is average (slightly embarrassing). The characters of the male protagonists are suitable for rags (bushi), and occasionally you can get some perverted XP, hehe
The style of the first short story has a sense of incompatibility with modern writing in ancient style, but the second ancient style world starts to be much smoother.
I don't know if it's because I'm older (?), But when I see some mouth-obsessed "I", my toes will be on the ground in embarrassment ()
25.12.16
Host / Future technology benefits mankind / From a small factory that is about to go bankrupt to becoming the richest man in the world
You can watch it without CP, the love line is only in the last three chapters, the comment area belike: Please, please, don't write the love line_(:з∠)_
I liked it very much in the early stage, but there was a big problem with the rhythm in the later stage. It ended in a hurry at the most exciting time, and some foreshadowing was not written, such as the reason why the protagonist dropped out of school, and the emotional drama was better off (next time the author will write without CP)...
Advantages: Every product launched is something I really want to own!
As well as some logic details, although there seem to be a lot of small bugs in the comment area, I feel that the detailed logic has been taken into account as much as possible, taking into account taxation, product sources, synchronization of research institutes, registration with regulatory bureaus, etc. I hope the author will continue to make progress~
This is an old article that I reviewed during a recent event. The author's VR experience hall was my enlightenment in infrastructure construction. Now it seems not as amazing as in memory. Later, I read some of the author's other articles, but the routines are somewhat similar. I will come back to read them after a while and read them often.
25.12.14
The heroine has no cp and is slightly different from the introduction. The plot has about three parallel lines, interstellar travel, official cooperation and scientific and technological progress, and the entertainment industry. The overall atmosphere is heavy and not as relaxing as expected. The writing is limited, but the story is complete before and after. The entertainment industry part is not very exciting, and it is not written in too much detail (for example, I will not write about specific scenes), especially because time travel often occurs in the middle. Personally, I feel that the rhythm of this part is a bit broken (you need to recall where the entertainment industry has been before when you come back). The pace of the time travel is a bit slow, the family background in acting and the official support are high (?), There are some minor bugs, but the general direction and intention are quite good.
25.12.08