Stocking up on articles in winter. It's a cool story about the protagonist being the strongest, but it's very tiring to watch the incidents of believers being victimized one after another. Every time I have to skip a long section of the story before I can see a bit of the plot of the protagonist's dimensionality reduction and attack. Moreover, the writing skills are a bit poor, the connection between plots is very abrupt every time, and the story of new believers is also very stiff, so I have no patience to read it, let alone be emotionally infected.
But it's still fun just to watch the protagonist part.
A great article to read while stocking up on articles in winter! I didn't have high hopes at first, I just thought it was a simple infinite flow, but I didn't expect it to be quite good after watching it. In the early stage, I felt it was a little sluggish, but in the later stage, it got better and seemed much smoother.
It's just that in horror dungeons, the romantic atmosphere is always easily interrupted by the game process and other players, and it's often impossible to be alone due to threats from players.
Articles I came across during winter's hoarding of articles. It's really a bit overwhelming. The first 33 chapters are almost all about the original plot, which is very frustrating. After the husband confessed in Chapter 33, I thought I would completely distance myself from the original plot and live a sweet life. However, it always comes out again after a few chapters. The two protagonists don't press people to death, they only respond passively like unresponsive cotton. I really can't stand it anymore.
If the author wants to write a sweet story, can he just write it normally? What does it mean to write a few sweet chapters and suddenly insert a disgusting plot point in the middle? After a few chapters, he starts to think about the solution to this plot, and then he stops thinking about it and continues to be sweet. After a few chapters, the unresolved matter turns out to be an accident. Is this rhythm meant to make people angry? Whether you are following the plot line or the emotional line, it is as uncomfortable as eating a fly.
Oh, the author also wanted to write a satirical article, but I just said straight away that all the places where he wanted to be satirical were exactly the opposite, which made me very unhappy.
Also, this article is not as simple as having a child. Pregnancy, childbirth and raising a child account for two-thirds of the plot. Those who can accept the setting of having a child but cannot accept that this is a main article about having a child can leave. I feel like the author just loves to torment people. It's very similar to those in short videos where the protagonist's crying, making trouble and tearing up the house is brought to a friend's house to talk about how great it is to have a baby.
Articles I came across during winter's hoarding of articles. It's a pity that I only wrote it here, because there is obviously at least half of the advanced copy content behind it, and even the final chapter has been foreshadowed.
On the other hand, this article seemed to want to describe Shou's IQ at the beginning. In the novice dungeon, Shou was said not to be like a novice ghost, but in the second half of the dungeon, Shou lay flat for half of the dungeon, and there were attackers involved in the last two dungeons, making it impossible to see Shou's strong ability in comparison.
Moreover, the system being attacked has a low IQ and weak abilities, which not only cannot help but can even be said to be a disservice. Especially after the attack system appears, there are various dislikes, but readers can also see that the dislike is well-founded and very reasonable. If it were in a general system story, the system would only be used as a mascot for releasing tasks, and it would only be cute, so it wouldn't matter. However, this is an unlimited flow story. Shou's ability is so strong, and VIPs have such a great advantage in picking copies, but Shou's system has not been used at all, and he will be completely pissed off by such a system that holds him back.
The fourth dungeon advanced to the advanced level and it finally became Shou's home field. He was preparing to grow up in the next dungeon, but it ended like this. It can be said that Shou's character highlights were hardly reflected.
The author's writing style has a little too much room for improvement... And it feels more and more rigid as he writes. In the middle and later stages, it is completely forced description, and many logical and emotional changes are not smooth at all. Maybe I don't like the dull character of the protagonist. In this case, letting the protagonist be abused and misunderstood feels like bullying an honest person. It's really a bit of a scam to write such a "bitter first and then sweet" plot in the name of a heart-throb novel. I really can't stand this kind of setting that is superficially abusive but actually cares about it in my heart. Don't get involved if you haven't learned how to love.
It's quite interesting. I picked up some good articles during my winter collection of articles. I didn't expect animal articles to be so interesting besides being cute. Looking forward to the day when the author finishes writing the twelve zodiac signs
It's not bad. It's a sweet article that I picked up during my winter collection of articles. It's very lighthearted and refreshing without being boring. The emotional line is also a matter of course.
When I read the first part, I thought it was some kind of mindless, soft and sweet text, and I almost couldn't stand it. But then it turned out that the writing became bigger again, so it was okay.
The logic of the plot in the later stage is a bit too simple, and it feels that it does not match the huge inside story I wanted to write in the previous article.
Overall, the articles I picked up during my winter collection were okay. I was willing to buy them at half the price. It was quite relaxing at first, but I wanted to get excited about the finale, but the pacing was too sloppy and I wasn't impressed at all. Then the final rise to interstellar was a bit abrupt.
Although it is an old article from 89 years ago, it is indeed not good enough in some places, but really, compared to those mass-produced things nowadays, it is at least decent in all aspects.