The front is probably the best looking, but the back is indeed a bit messy as others have said.
Personally, I read "Pet Shop of Horror" and "Leng Che of the Ghost Lantern" in Chapter 42, and suddenly felt disconnected when I suddenly switched from writing to writing about hell.
After Chapter 48, I started mainly writing the curse chapter, and the timeline is the fifth period of high school.
Chapter 65 jumps to Teacher 5 who writes about a parallel world. At the same time, the world merges with Fumino's if line.
When it comes to evaluation... It means that no matter what, at least I have finished writing it.
It feels like it is also called "Big Boss, Who is Your Brother?", And combined with several other books in the series, the happy ending of this story seems to be false. Although it will eventually lead to HE, the process is still a good one.
Speaking of which, I came here to read it because my favorite author was anti-plagiarism and mentioned this article. Although I hate plagiarism, anti-plagiarism has always been a troublesome and laborious task, and many people still think it is overkill. The protagonist is very powerful. He is doing a great thing under pressure. I like the warm feeling this article gives me.
The setting is very novel, but the story feels more like it is told from the perspective of CP. Lin Keshuang seems to be a Schrödinger until the end, but he can generally justify himself. The portrayal of the protagonist is very brilliant, and it is not a loss after watching it.
The plot line involves the past and present life, and the emotional line also has two pairs of Danmei deputy CPs. The plots are interlocking and suitable for reading in one sitting.
After re-editing the old article, the white moonlight filter has faded a lot, but I think it still looks good if you ignore the details.
The plot line is very exciting, and the organizational feature of taking in the Erwuzi is really interesting. At the end, seeing a bunch of Erwuzi who have taken refuge with the protagonist makes me want to laugh.
The emotional line... The enemies are too strong and the CP growth cannot keep up, which makes people anxious.
The protagonist is very handsome, and the plot of his appearance is stable and joyful. However, I don't really like the plot where the protagonist's behavior is recorded and made into a ghost video. It feels very disrespectful.