Overall it's good, and the messy extras won't affect you if you don't buy it.
The original male protagonist had a lot of roles, and he was not only the heroine. This was also a master-disciple story. The author couldn't tell the difference between the big king and the big king...
The male protagonist was not tortured enough, and he was unhappy. If the second male protagonist was still alive, what would happen to this bastard male protagonist...
If you look at it as an ordinary romance novel, it's good. I liked it very much when I was a sophomore in high school.
The second editor would like to add: Is there any mistake? In order to praise the male protagonist, I just stepped on several other well-shaped supporting actors. They were in love and had a good relationship. Every time they fell in love, they would end with the sentence "xxx and I are not suitable, so let's break up." This kind of plot, the author, you really can't write all the supporting actors to death, don't do this kind of plot.
The supporting characters are really miserable, fighting to death in the love between this pair of heroes. In the "Crematorium" stage, the man took the initiative to have sex with the heroine, just like a criminal. Did the author have some misunderstanding of the word crematorium? The heroine actually forgave her later...
I've eaten all this shit, so it's not too much to leave a negative review.
The ending was rushed, and every small part in the previous part was very abusive to the female protagonist, but because the male protagonist was replaced and the final male protagonist was not one of the scumbags, I forgave it.
The part about torturing the scumbag is actually just average. The best part is actually the part about torturing the female protagonist... After opening the Shura Field, the plot obviously became rushed.
The second male lead has always been annoying and jumpy from beginning to end, which is annoying to death. The same goes for the second female lead, who keeps causing trouble for the male and female protagonists. There are too many intellectually subduing characters, and the female protagonist is just a traditional white-flower character, a tool for conquering, and has nothing to watch. The male protagonist is well-shaped, and it can only be said that as an ordinary master-disciple story, it is still passable, so give it a three-star rating.
There are still too few male-torture parts, and it feels a bit light-hearted. The female protagonist actually looks like a tsundere in the crematorium... The writing is good, but I feel a little uncomfortable not seeing the male protagonist die a few times.
The part about torturing the male protagonist feels really good. The female protagonist was not actually killed by the male protagonist, but someone else controlled his body. He even lost his memory about this, and was elbowed by the female protagonist quite miserably in the middle and later stages.