Cp Zhongli's writing style is very good, and Zhongli's character is also very personal. The emotions are very delicate, and the end of the text is so good that I cried QAQ (the extra is HE)
The story of becoming stronger and changing misfortune is also the story of being loved. The collection is too low, and the copywriting does not highlight the highlights. There are basically no OOC characters (maybe Ruo Tuo), but it does focus more on self-designed characters (Tree King Pal, Flower God, and Red King count for half). However, the self-designed characters are not as outstanding as the characters set by Genshin Impact. The charming Haishimu, I really like Haishimu's character setting. He is cold, firm, sincere and never tempted. When I read the article, I was really looking forward to getting along with the peer Elhaysen, but unfortunately there was no focus on it. I was also looking forward to the water dragon and Morax... It seems that only the three kings of Xumi have written more, and secondly, the Tinari part at the beginning... I really like the story with the integration of plot and emotional lines. The writing is also good. It is rare for this article to be the best. It would be better if the emotional description could be more delicate and rich. Occasionally there are some issues with improper detailing, especially when there are more than 60 chapters. There are a lot of intimate scenes, but unfortunately there are no detailed descriptions. I hate not to meet each other in xx. (PS: Personally, I am not very satisfied with the viewing angle. If I think about it carefully, I feel that Haishimu is at a disadvantage)
CP Zhongli currently has single arrows for Wendy and Flower God. Time goes backwards. The character is the fourth natural disaster at the beginning and grows every time he travels through time (but there is no description of the character transition, which is a bit sudden). The writing is very good, the emotional line is the main plot and the plot is supplemented. The description of abilities is very cool, and the relationship with Zhongli and Wendy is super sweet. (Updates have been stopped)
I like more: Immortal Boat Holder before v, the fight with Morax in the Demon God stage and its extras, Yaksha (Kanria) -108 Teyvat ends, and the Star God part in the back (strongly recommend Navilite at 100.101)
Generally speaking, the description is relatively straightforward, with a lot of redundant, obscure and jumpy descriptions, which makes it easy to get tired. Maybe this is a stream of consciousness? The protagonist is a strong and ruthless heartthrob, but there are some painful descriptions of suffering that are completely self-inflicted (such as the part about the three kings of Xumi), which feels ridiculous, and the "all for thesis" setting has no causes and consequences, which is not very convincing. There is no description of what the written thesis brings, which is somewhat hollow. Ps: I personally don't like the pursuit of the identity of husband and wife in the article.
The fourth-day disaster player is a huge fan. I really like the Xumi story before v, especially the description of Elhaysen. There is beauty in the text. Secondly, I also like the intellectual chapter, the inorganic love is restrained and affectionate. Then the story about the pharmacist cutting meat to feed the eagle in the abundance chapter was shocking, and the chapters about Leo, Ayato, and Navi were very well written.
It's a pity that the description of love in other chapters is no longer so elaborate, and the protagonist is quite dark, chaotic and evil in many chapters, especially in Gul City, Mondstadt, Gale Wind, etc.
Cp Abedo, a very gentle story, I don't know whether it is a martial arts style or a Japanese light novel style. The early part describing Abedo's pursuit of Dorian is very touching, and the part where Dorian buys the novel is very interesting, but unfortunately it becomes dull later on.
It's quite interesting, the plot and the protagonist's character. But the shortcomings are also obvious. First, the charm of everyone in Teyvat is not written, each has its own OOC, and the emotional line is a bit greasy; second, it favors boys over girls, such as the stinky woman Tianli, the flower god is the ultimate in beauty and weakness... There are also many descriptions of women being inferior to men. Although it is not written about the protagonist, it is still intolerable; third, there are many scenes (especially the protagonist's transformation) that feel like they could be written more shockingly, but unfortunately they are not.
Key points: You can only watch 155 at most. The plot of the self-created demon in the past is not bad, but in 156 Teyvat is reborn and encounters the traveler Yin, it follows the main line of Genshin Impact and mainly writes the emotional line. Then the shortcomings are magnified. Everyone is in OOC, and no character (including the protagonist) is watchable.
It was okay before Chapter 91. Although 90 chapters of the Demon God of Dreams and the Demon God of Whirlpool were too long, and the emotional lines were quite satisfactory. After Chapter 91, getting along with each other became a bit greasy, and many characters were obviously OOC.
The king of Kanria is a heartthrob. The plot rhythm is very good up to the restoration of the kingdom, and the subsequent revenge part of the seven reincarnations is also very good. Other parts are a bit draggy, and the chapters about the emotional line of the emperor are particularly good. The main plot seems to have come to an end, quite suddenly. The main emotional line of the postscript is very interesting, Lin Xun vividly interprets the heart-warming arsonist [Like]
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